Us

Us

A Poem by Revery
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Thank you Robbie for completing my poem.

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I Love you in a way that can't be defined

Admiration is released unconfined

Quality and easy connection as though refined

Souls and spirits tethered and aligned

Lovely communication opined

Blown away musing about us combined


Thank you for being You!!!

by revery

To have and to hold


A Connection is defined...

Pure and tangible...

The admiration entwined...

souls that gravitate toward each other...

cannot be denied...

by robbie


© 2012 Revery



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A Connection is defined...
Pure and tangible...
The admiration entwined...
souls that gravitate toward each other...
cannot be denied...


this is amazing ... well put

Posted 1 Year Ago


Simply beautiful , rhytmic.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Stunning! Lovely thoughts expressed by both of you, brought together in a great write. "Souls that gravitate toward each other... cannot be denied..." lovely lines Robbie.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Wow, this is a wonderful collaboration. Beautiful! I understand the sentiment all too well... wonderful to see in another pairing in this poem. As someone else posted "words and souls intertwined"
Nice to see!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Beautifuly written by you both, a combination of words that shows the strength of connection that two true soulmates share.

Posted 1 Year Ago


A wonderful collaboration; words and souls intertwined.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Rythimic, loving write. Nicely done, Revery!

Posted 1 Year Ago


A Connection is defined...
Pure and tangible...
The admiration entwined...
souls that gravitate toward each other...
cannot be denied...

I love this!... Beautifully written.

Posted 1 Year Ago


very solid, rhythmical, and powerful! I like how the form of the poem contributes to the meaning of the words! great job! my sincere admirations!

Posted 1 Year Ago



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