Till I Visit Again

Till I Visit Again

A Poem by Rhea

Closed eyes
Portals to other worlds
Where I fly, where I live
Colorful skies,
Vibrant hues of water
Music as gentle as a lullaby
People from present lives and the past
Come for visits 

My eyes thirst for more
But with the break of dawn
It all fades back into darkness
I bid farewell to that land
Till I visit again





© 2012 Rhea



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Rhea
Something I wrote about dreams, and how I see them. Please review! :)

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beautiful. I know I dream every night but I never remember them.

Posted 4 Years Ago


I loved how you described dreams as portals to other worlds. For some reason, that line resonates with me. Also, the lines "people from present lives and past/Come for visits" were beautiful.

Final verdict: short, sweet, perfect! Keep dreaming :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


It seems you have such lovely dreams, how I long for sweet dreams. Nice!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Congratulations this poem has been "approved" for publication in...

THE MAGICAL MYTHICAL MYSTERY COMPENDIUM.

-Fantasy and Factual Poems of the Arcane.

By John Phoenix Hutchinson and Others. (c) 2012

Please feel free to submit other poems as you are not limited to one entry. Also please write a short "bio" about yourself and send to me via private message. This will be published along with your poem. Thanks J.P.H.

Anyone wanting to make Submissions to this Writers Cafe "e" book Project can do so on my group page, the deadline is 1st of November 2012.


Posted 5 Years Ago


Rhea

5 Years Ago

thankyou! and what do i include in the bio?
John Phoenix Hutchinson.

5 Years Ago

Just a short paragraph about you and what inspires you to write.
Rhea

5 Years Ago

k
this is nice. I really honestly like this poem.... well done!!!
-Chesney Chey(:

Posted 5 Years Ago


The land where we visit almost everyday...nd sometyms we miss it so much...good write

Posted 5 Years Ago


Dreams !!! The land of the sub-conscious mind !!! Very well described

Posted 5 Years Ago


Dreams allow us to travel to better places. I like the gentle tone of the poem and the positive ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea

5 Years Ago

thank you sir, for reviewing this piece.
I am at that time in life where dreams are more precious than waking hours .. A tear falls when I leave that place of peace .. .. Guess it is a glimpse of the other side .. ..

Calm ... I love this .. Thank you ... Jazz

Posted 5 Years Ago


its soothing.

Posted 5 Years Ago



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