Longing For Summer

Longing For Summer

A Poem by Aehr

I long for the heat, for the days of May

For swimming in the ocean, for the light of day

I long for the juices, the drinks and the ice

And all the tangy, juicy edibles, which in summer, taste nice

 

I long for bright colours, the sun, and the beach

And the holidays when you don't have to hear teachers teach

I long for the tan, the friends, and the fun

When at ten you can smile, and say 'the night has just begun'

 

I long for the sun kissed days I can spend in the fields

And unlike winter, from the cold, when I need no shields

I long for the quiet starry skies at night

And dandelions and daisies at every single sight

 

I long for the harsh, lingering cold to end

I'm so much more alive in the summer, my friend

I want the breeze and the light to visit again

I miss the long walks in summer down the lane

 

 

© 2013 Aehr


Author's Note

Aehr
I'm missing summer, and I want it to come back!!! lol :P So... I wrote a rhyme on it!
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nice work.....so much hope in here

Posted 11 Years Ago


How nice, know just how you feel, summer needs to be on its way today. Cool poem!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aehr

11 Years Ago

:)
I long for the summer
I long for the icecreams
I'm sick of these clouds
Tell the sun to stop hiding
Come out mister n show me the light
I'm sick of the grey and hue less skies!!!!!!
Heheheheheheheheheheh
A really nice poem Rhea........evn i'm missing the summers!!!!!!!


Posted 11 Years Ago


Aehr

11 Years Ago

sahi mei yaar... I hate winters ! :P But the only good thing is that it's your birthday in December .. read more
Flutterby aish

11 Years Ago

hahaha!!!!!!
Aehr

11 Years Ago

:)
I long for a winter..a cold freezing day
I'm sick of summer and days so like May
Let me see snow,crystals and ice
Getting out of Florida..sure would be nice !!!!
Sorry, I guess I went off a bit there...Loved the poem

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aehr

11 Years Ago

hehe.. you should write one on winter :D thanks, by the way :)
I particularly liked this one as it has a sense of longing for something warm well written and also inspiring a sense of belonging for something brighter

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aehr

11 Years Ago

thank you. Really means a lot! :)
"I long for bright colours, the sun, and the beach
And the holidays when you don't have to hear teachers teach
I long for the tan, the friends, and the fun
When at ten you can smile, and say 'the night has just begun'

I long for the sun kissed days I can spend in the fields"

Gosh, don't we all? I miss summer so much :/ the beach, the feeling of freedom, all nighters, hanging out with people at four in the morning.. I miss it so much. You described the feeling of summer perfectly. Great job with this, it's beautiful (:

Posted 11 Years Ago


wow.....very nice.......that;s a spirit ...
u know what i do like + love = enjoy such sort of well writing....
really......it flutters me......whenevr u'll read out my poems' u'll see there my way of writing......this time i wanna give 100/100,coz...it's like my style of writng.....
i liked it......but i too loved it...very nice "RHEA"....
now may be u r following my style of writting........?{kidding}

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ah, how I dream for summer to return also. XD

Wonderful poem, Rhea! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aehr

11 Years Ago

thank you, Summer. Of course, your name is summer, so you light up every place even in the winter, I.. read more
Me too. Winter had just begin. I miss the green forest and warm days. I like your wish in the poem. The cold of Winter make us appreciate the warm days of spring. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aehr

11 Years Ago

:) thank you sir

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