B*****d Children

Malformed is the dangling eye;

split and blind

we are

on this idle rock.

Reviews

[Christine Ann Wedo]

I concur to this message. We are in fact blind to all the evil in the world. Great poem hon, love it and love you!

[Vria P Crow]

WIFEY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you for reading! I shall stop by your profile and read some of your work.

[Lorry]

Wow, I think you just broke my mind with these words Ria. We truly are blind...and more than a little dumb.

[Vria P Crow]

Thank you always for reading, Nemo!

[Lorry]

And thank you for writing. Don't stop :)

[Vria P Crow]

Don't worry, I won't. :D I write everyday but don't always post it so I don't overload. I will also be catching up on Reviewing. I must come visit your writings.

[1VJ]

Nothing/no one in this world is perfect. It's all perception and thought provoking poetry.

[Vria P Crow]

I concur. Thanks for reading!

[Shane Mohamed]

That surely is an unpleasant sight. I loved the imagery though. Well done. I haven't heard from you in a loooooong time. I wish you'd come back.

[Vria P Crow]

Please pardon my delay. I am back after a long break. I hope all is well with you.

[JC]

thought provoking like a Buddha Koan...

[The Twin Arenas]

cool. reminds me a bit of Brion Gysin.