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b l o s s o m • t i m e  (Japanese beauty)

b l o s s o m • t i m e (Japanese beauty)

A Poem by Richard
"

HAIKU … for a change of pace.

"

© 2015 Richard



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Richard
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Richard,
Now this something Iv'e not tried; (Haiku) To present the picture you have intended is really neat! I love the way you have honored Japanese culture of the season here.
Delicate says so much in the first line and then in the second line I found the phrase "meandering gentle hosts to feel like the breeze carrying the fragrance and the people being blessed by all the beauty also blessed by the fragrance.
thanks so much for the great inspiration in both form and style.
Kathy

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard

2 Months Ago

Hi, Dear Kathy🌻
Thank you so warmly for reading me.
Nothing graciously pleases anym.. read more
Kathy Van Kurin

2 Months Ago

Richard,
Different feelings expressed through a form understandable within a culture and we g.. read more
Richard

2 Months Ago

You are too sweet. : )



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The appreciation of these blooms are delightfully conveyed in these skilfully crafted words. Thanks for the picture imprinted in our minds.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard

2 Months Ago

I, for one, am grateful you have. : )
kitty

2 Months Ago

Again thank you M'lord. Your presence is always graciously accepted! Fare thee well from over the se.. read more
Richard

2 Months Ago

Brightest, warmest smiles to thee! : )))
Superb imagery, saw similar myself at the weekend. Breathtaking beauty. Your posted image also a delight.

Thank you dear Richard

Chris

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard

2 Months Ago

that such a woman
would praise such a man as me
embraces my pen 🌸

Wa.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

2 Months Ago

How very sweet of you to say so Richard. Have a hug from me.
Richard

2 Months Ago

How more warmed can a man possibly feel?
Love the format, love the pic and love the subject matter - you have three ticks and my admiration - :-)

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard

2 Months Ago

Thank you, Sir.
That an artist of your note loves anything about anything I've composed is hi.. read more
and with this gentle beauty~ I'm drifting with these petals to Japan....

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard

2 Months Ago

What a wondrous feeling of thoughts and imagery you paint into imaginings, Dear Gh🌼

.. read more
Light

2 Months Ago

~~~~~🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸~~~~~
Baby’s breath soft and tender meandering in loves sweet splendour- beauty in eye of beholder - and such beauty it is - short and sweet - 🌹

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard

4 Months Ago

Very endearing words, Kelly🌸
Touching tenderly the heart.

Hugs 'n warmest b.. read more
When you try to research the rules of haiku, the guidelines can be daunting, and the information out there is varied. Some say it's just a simple matter of a 5-7-5 syllable count on three lines, and other sources give FAR more complicated rules, and some say the 5-7-5 rule should be disregarded if writing a haiku in English. It can make you tentative to attempt it, but I enjoy writing short poems, and I like a challenge, so I've written a fair few of these. The one you've done here is lovely.



Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard

1 Year Ago

Karen,
Since the Japanese rules for Haiku and Senryu are written in a language based on phone.. read more
Richard

1 Year Ago

Thank you, also, Karen Dear, for your gracious compliment … hugs! ⁓ Richard 🌺
Richard,
Now this something Iv'e not tried; (Haiku) To present the picture you have intended is really neat! I love the way you have honored Japanese culture of the season here.
Delicate says so much in the first line and then in the second line I found the phrase "meandering gentle hosts to feel like the breeze carrying the fragrance and the people being blessed by all the beauty also blessed by the fragrance.
thanks so much for the great inspiration in both form and style.
Kathy

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard

2 Months Ago

Hi, Dear Kathy🌻
Thank you so warmly for reading me.
Nothing graciously pleases anym.. read more
Kathy Van Kurin

2 Months Ago

Richard,
Different feelings expressed through a form understandable within a culture and we g.. read more
Richard

2 Months Ago

You are too sweet. : )
Beautiful writing and well chosen imagewhich is ideal for this poetic form. A quietly joyous celebration of the present moment, excellent work

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard

12 Months Ago

Thank you, George,
You're a prince of a fella and a hell'a of a poetic reviewer …
ha.. read more
George Coombs

12 Months Ago

Thankyou Richard
I really like this. I was thinking cherry blossom but you fooled me. Valentine

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Dear Kathie!
You've made my day smile … happy hugs! ⁓ Richard : )
A change of pace is it.. I see a delicate haiku

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard

2 Years Ago

Bless you, Dear Renée, for gifting my humble poems two reads and lovely, delicate reviews today.read more

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