Secret Rendezvous ⁓ (lil' bit naughty)

Quickie Form

 

                              You smile at me                 

   I smile at thee 

  and all the air's a'fire. 

                      You touch me there

 I do declare,

       "Such bliss you so inspire!

                  What shall we do

 I'm asking you

 is there a place to go?

                   Secrets we'll share

          while we're in there ...

     and no one else will know."

  

Richard W. Jenkins

©2015

  

"Quickie"

My own form … try one, you'll like it!  ; )

© 19 Apr 1987

Verses (unlimited) any topic:

2 minimum, 6 lines each

Verse Count:

4/4/6/4/4/6

Rhyme scheme:

xxxa

xxxa

xxxxxb

xxxc

xxxc

xxxxxb

xxxd

xxxd

xxxxxe

xxxf

xxxf

xxxxxxe

Alignment

Author's choice

Reviews

[Lisasview]

Secrets, secrets, secrets..we all have them..This, I believe has hidden metaphors through out..secrets behind the words..
One needs to read this short poem several times to perhaps, find the secret..
Quite a sensual poem..which i loved..through and through..but let's keep that a secret..okay..

[Richard🖌]

Mum's the word, Lisa Dear 🤫

Sooo, your keen eye caught those sensually subliminal secrets, eh? Few do, but I'm not the least surprised they touched your, er … interest.😏

Isn't sharing such fun?
Especially, when it's so sensually loved! ⁓ Richard🖌

[Lisasview]

This sharing is so amazing.. As I say such a new adventure for me dear Richard!!
Lisa

[Gee]

As smooth as you are sir. Brings to mind the office store cupboard.
Hope you are well Richard

[Richard🖌]

Aw shucks, Gee! 🤓

Thank you, Syr … what a nice thing to say about an olde bard.
Uh-huh, it does bring to mind (where was that you did what?) so many delightfully furtive trysts. 🤫

All is well here … wishing you the same!⁓ Richard🖌

[lovelymarina]

Oo, wasn't this a fun read. The style, in my opinion, brought it all together, not to mention the mysteriousness in the title. Loved this!
Marina

[Richard🖌]

Gosh, Marina🦋

Such a lovely review, Dear Poetess.
How do you suppose I knew you'd love this rhythmically flowing, suggestive little Quickie piece?

How happy I am you did … hugs! ⁓ Richard🖌

[Kathy Van Kurin]

"Secret Rendezvous"
Richard,
It is so enjoyable to find the obvious enjoyment found with new forms of writing. I find it anew on your page! The subject matter here is just enough to lead the reader to smile and see the happiness of the two in this poem. Adventurous is the right word. I always find your work refreshing to my heart.
Blessings,
Kathy

[Richard🖌]

Grin*
Sooo, you found this little teaser, eh?
Kathy Dear,
No one perceives and enjoys my humble poetic efforts in the warm and appreciative ways you do.
I feel a warming smile all over when I see your name under one of my pieces.

What could be better than believing my work refreshes your heart … happy hugs to you, M'Dear Lady-Poet! ⁓ Richard : )

Psst!
Try a Quickie … I know you'll enjoy it. ; )

[Sultrysoul]

I love this form. I accept your challenge my dear. I hope it do well. Xoxo

[Richard🖌]

I thought you might, Belinda Dear. ; )
I know you'll do a dynamite job with it, too, and make me proud. : D

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Definitely a quickie that brings a tender smile to the reader Richard and written in such a romantic typeface. You smooth talker!

[Richard🖌]

Big smile to the site's King of Romance!
Look who's calling the kettle black … LOL!
Thanks a million for the sweet review and blush-worthy compliment, My Fine Friend! ⁓ Richard

[Valentine]

This made me want to chuckle but the reason I cannot say...............guess....Valentine

[Richard🖌]

MMmmm … with my imagination I can envision why, Kathie, and I love the very thought and imagery of you … well, let's say I just do! ; )
Thanks, Darlin', for reading this sweet and warming little number … hugs! ⁓ Richard

[~]

Tasting things under the fidelity of secrecy. This looked like fun, and I tried a verse :D

we met, we shared,
we touched, and stared.
my skin, my voice, my sighs
no resentment
yes contentment
your sin, your choice, your comprise.

:D thank you for inventing new ways to change the heart rhythm :D :D