⁓ In that Moment ⁓ (when dreams whisper)

⁓ In that Moment ⁓ (when dreams whisper)

A Poem by Richard
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English Sonnet

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© 2017 Richard



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Richard
Picture: The Dreamer by Natasha Von

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An excellent sonnet Richard;lovely words, the thing it captures for me is the importance and preciousness of the present moment e.g "the last thing on my lips..." a precious moment in itself before one drifts into sleep taking the beloved with you-great writing

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard

3 Months Ago

Thank you sincerely, George.
You words of praise, enjoyment, and understanding are a mana to .. read more
George Coombs

3 Months Ago

your welcome Richard



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Oh ~ that one word beckoning one to Come and join together "In that Moment", is a wonderful dream many can and do relate to. This is a beautiful, tender heartfelt penned Sonnet ~ and the included artwork makes it an amazing piece of poetry.

Richard, your words easily draws the reader into that dreamlike moment with you ~ well done!

Blessings, 🙏
~ mj



Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard

2 Months Ago

Thank you, Mary Jo,
I love to write poems that make readers dream and relate to the essence i.. read more
Lovely dreams..of longing, desire........... more
All we want is the touch, the warmth of heart..
All we truly desire ...is love............

Lovely-soft-tender-touching.......

Jazzy

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard

3 Months Ago

Thank you Dear Jasmne,
I always know you're going to offer something to make me think and fee.. read more
Richard

3 Months Ago

"that's why I get the warmest smile all through. : D"
J. J.  Nightingale

3 Months Ago

You are welcome.. ......smiles............
Beautifully written, in a form I can but emulate.
The passion shown is sensually presented, in a dream like essence. Building is impeccable, while the romantic presence stays true to true romance.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard

3 Months Ago

Thank you, Dear Poet,
Coming from one passionate sonneteer to another, your words of understa.. read more
Time, the thought and write of it, seems to pre-occupy so many people's thoughts at present. Whether it's our uncertainties and dulled hope, i don't know. perhaps we need Love to take the reins its powerful hands and make miracles.

However, when poetry like yours displays such a heart and concept.. one thinks how valuable the human mind appreciates that gift we all have yet sometimes waste.. let dormant. Your poem is both gentle-beautiful yet sensual-raw. Wonderful its meaning, wonderful its display.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard

4 Months Ago

Well, Dear Em,
I'm not smart or deep enough to hold the answers to such profound questions, b.. read more
An excellent sonnet Richard;lovely words, the thing it captures for me is the importance and preciousness of the present moment e.g "the last thing on my lips..." a precious moment in itself before one drifts into sleep taking the beloved with you-great writing

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard

3 Months Ago

Thank you sincerely, George.
You words of praise, enjoyment, and understanding are a mana to .. read more
George Coombs

3 Months Ago

your welcome Richard
wow...i just loved this poem....especially the last two lines...they just touched my heart...how two heart became one...isn't it a wonderful thought being in such environment when two persons who love each other come together as one..it's simply wow...

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard

10 Months Ago

What a lovely, inspiring, and gracious review you've gifted this rather warmly sensual piece, Little.. read more
Hello, Richard! :)
This is a lovely sonnet. It seems you've found the trick to wake up in a good mood. Haha
Of all the lovely phrases here, "as though you'd laid your heartbeat in my hand" really grabbed me.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard

11 Months Ago

Thanks, Dear Matt!
That is my most favorite line in this classically rokmantic piece … the .. read more
Hmmmm...this is the second of your poems I've read, and I am left wondering just what to say. I love the feel of it...the sense of reading something written by one of the classic poets we all love and admire...and yet it is uniquely your own. You capture the promise of love...something I have a hard time doing. My work usually centers around the darker side of it...but that doesn't mean I don't believe there is something more. Your work definitely pays homage to the 'something more', and it brings a sigh and a smile. It's the 'happily ever after' at the end of a best-seller. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard

1 Year Ago

I certainly am thrilled you thought of something to say, and what you said ws exactly what I'd want .. read more
ReedWrite

1 Year Ago

LOL...ahhh, Richard. Grins at you and smiles. You have a way with words, don't you? The golden tongu.. read more
Richard

1 Year Ago

Words reflect the being, yours and mine create a lovely image.
Thank you for the smiles and g.. read more
Again, you've beckoned and I've "Come" in answer to the calling.

Your words have such a deep depth of tenderness and sensuality that it makes one's heart swell and a soul seeking a blissful release "in unison".

Thank you for sharing yourself through your words Sir. 😇Angel

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angelheart1

1 Year Ago

You are most welcome Sir, for it is my Pleasure to read your lovely words. 😇
Richard

1 Year Ago

Sighhhh ... !
Angelheart1

1 Year Ago

There's that wonderful "Sighhhh" again, which means as much to me as your words.

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