life thirst (love's need)

life thirst (love's need)

A Poem by Richard
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Japanese Sedoka … for Jasmine

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© 2017 Richard



Author's Note

Richard
Japanese Sedoka
Syllables 5/7/7-5/7/7, etc; no limits to number of verses,
no capitalization, punctuation, or rhyme; about any topic,
an easy and enjoyable form to compose.

Painting by: Suzanne Mitus-Uribe, oil on canvas.

Well meant, constructive critique and comments are always welcome! : )

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As Earth needs both rain and Sun, as life needs its breath, its rain to quench, its Sun to warm, Love, beautifully with glowing hope You've said it.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard

3 Months Ago

I thank you, GH, warmly and sincerely for the sweet, endearing words of understanding and praise you.. read more
An interesting form to think through...

Using it DOES lead to serious consideration of the power of various languages and how they in turn interact within the limits of their country's poetic forms.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard

6 Months Ago

Yes, it's true, Chris,
I, too, find the Japanese forms interesting to contemplate how the sou.. read more
This is very pretty Richard. I did a little review of a Japanese Sedoka... very nice imagery. My favorite line..would be the last one. Rounds this little poem up quite well!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard

6 Months Ago

Susan Dear,
I like that line, too. : )
Whatever line suits your fancy, I am just jumpi.. read more
I see how simple things could be intensely portrayed, giving a perfect image and feel of it.
"bestowed loves warm need its due."
-divine
-flawless
-creative


Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard

6 Months Ago

Ohhh, another gracious Tazeen review!
How wonderful of you, M'Lady Faire.
Gosh, your i.. read more
That was so heavenly and full of much peace. Loved it!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard

6 Months Ago

And, You in beautiful Virginia, Maria … kiss the hilly, forest moon for me tonite.
Maria

6 Months Ago

Haha..if I find one I will do my best
Richard

6 Months Ago

I know you will, Maria.
Oh Richard, the gift is appreciated...
Especially wonderful.....

Jazzy..♥

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard

6 Months Ago

I am so very happy, Jasmine,
to have pleased you … I had so hoped it would.

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J. J.  Nightingale

6 Months Ago

Hugs and Smile back to you...

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