'Til all time stands still ... (tender touches)

Unmetered Monorhymes

’Til all time stands still …

Deep in my soul flowing to mind,

softened entreatments of you I find

in every feeling that starts to unwind

sensually lush touchings purely refined,

ever tenderly embracing, delightfully kind.

Leaves descending in colored throng,

Autumn gives way to Winter’s song,

lovers caress all through the night long,

hot surging plunges, soothing all wrong,

knowing with no other we rightfully belong.

Open your arms, gaze into my eyes,

invite me to share thy womanly sighs.

whisper warm truths, but never cold lies;

embrace our joys 'tween welcoming thighs,

give your heart never unto an untruthful guise.

Then, embrace with tender intent,

feeling soft ache’s yearning consent,

sweetest urges of your womanly assent,

sheer pheromone blessings of fiery advent;

that deep within you’d know my manly extent.

Moonlight above warms every chill,

the greengage tree - soft whippoorwill,

a fruit ever sweet, gentled melody’s trill,

life’s heartbeats ’n dreams each sate our fill.

I’ll love you, Darling, 'til all time stands still …

Richard W. Jenkins

©2017

Author's Note

Painting courtesy of Google Images.

Well-meant critique and constructive comments are always welcome! : )

Reviews

[Mirror]

You have a true nature of a Teacher. It reveals in your writing that you have acquired knowledge on this field whether academically or by research. you keep the rules.....poetic originality.....clarity.....and makes me love poem all over again.

The love these two souls show in this poem is genuine. It makes love lovely.

[Richard🖌]

Thank you most warmly, Dear Poetess,
Nothing is more satisfying and gratifying than a woman who knows what real loving feels like and knows how to express it with her stardust-filled, poetic pen.
Indeed, M'Lady, I'm a teacher of poetry … how deft of you to perceive this from one of my pieces; partly acquired, much studying, many dreams and fantasies, and endless living the realities that have all contributed to the humble piece you see dancing before you, and most all my writings.

Thank you again, Lovely Lady-Poet, for your final line, especially, and for making sharing so lovely, too … smiles 'n hugs to You! ⁓ Richard : )

[Mirror]

:-) "grinning. This is why I love WC. It poetic tenderness and nice people. Thank you, Sire, for the compliment.

[Richard🖌]

My words reflect your lovely spirit, M'Lady. ⁓ RJ : )

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Tender and beautiful together as one, when two souls find their common heart nothing can tear them apart- no distance, no time, the bond of love into eternity and beyond will never be shaken🌹

[Richard🖌]

Thank you, Dear Kelly✨
The sweet, tender knowings in your words are as an effulgently warm growings the heart and mind need to breathe and feel, as surely real as Spring is nigh, a gentle sigh, soft breeze passed-by ⁓ lovers' impending sensations cannot deny.

Your reflections on blended souls dance in perfect harmony with my own … most warmly🌼 ⁓ Richard

[lightsong]

I always loved how You can turn words like, (entreatments and pheromone) into something really delightful flowing with the rest of Your words, here again You gift us another steady written poem, the yearning voice of tenderness sweeps us through the seasons in a year... in each year, a cycle, that the tender voice becomes a voice of assurance, of trust, of faithfulness... of renewal... a voice of eternal yearnings through the nights, and as soft and gentle Your words and phrases are, as they resonance the strong passionate needs inside, that burning yearning.

like always, a most enjoyable romantic piece to read, where the spiritual bond no less than the joined bodies, where the mind is in love, the heart and spirit too, and together they dance in blissful harmony reflecting sheer serenity upon the page.

[Richard🖌]

Wow, Dear GH!
Your words sing a soft gentle melody unto my gratefully warmed and exuberantly pleasured ear.
Not only do your poems captivate me, even your reviews dance and caress, flow smoothly down, down, deep into an olde bard's core, and bless.

Your praise, your understanding of my poetry, your expressions of appreciation, everything you say is more than beautiful, and then some … what could i ever ask.

Thank you ever-so dearly and warmly … grateful hugs to thee, Lovely Lady-Poet! ⁓ Richard : )

[Susan 🦋]

If ever a poem caressed a woman's heart and soul so completely...this would be the one. Lets put format aside.. ( I'll get to that) What a truly beautiful write!..but more so, the feelings it evokes. The poems reads of lovers dreams and desire...those words rarely spoken...but should be. So purely captured..the hopes and desire to be loved like this. Till all time stands still...ahh, the heart will always want what it wants.. (crying, EVERY time Richard! You get me) ok ok breathe..Now, I like this format...smooth as silk, thinking I might try it. :-) I often wonder what resides in that beautiful soul of yours...your poetry is a lover's song.

[Richard🖌]

Gosh, Susan*
The simmering touch of your warming words leave a bard rather breathless, elated, and sweetly humbled, but I'm keeping them … each and every one. ; )
It's written that whatever resides in us has its equal and opposite side, allowing each to exist in whatever measure each side holds … like the yinYANG of life.

If my poetry "is a lover's song", your reviews are the melody that gifts them breath … thank you ever-so gratefully, Dear Poetess🍂 ⁓ Richard

[Susan 🦋]

:-) awwwwww

[Angelheart1]

“embrace our joys 'tween welcoming thighs,” ummm, how exciting and wonderful that moment would be.

Richard you are the best in taking the hand of this reader and leading the way into the heart of your writing through your words, leaving me weak but ready to experience it all and you’ve added a very nice piece of imagery to bring this sensually romantic poem to life.
Big tight hugs, Angel

[Richard🖌]

Hi, Angel! : )
What's one to say when a lovely poetess comes along and ingratiates a bard's humble efforts to tenderly touch his readers in a meaningfully warm way, and she tells him, with no uncertainty, he surely has.

"Big tight hugs" back to thee! ⁓ Richard ; )

[heavenscentgirl1]

Oh my, such tender heartfelt words I have found upon my return Richard. This is a beautifully penned piece that showcases your talent as a Master Poet as well as a very romantic man.

Each line drew me deeper into the moment as you described exactly how a woman yearns to be loved & treasured by a man. The last stanza is my most favorite with the last line melting my heart ~ “I’ll love you Darling, ‘til all time stands still ...”. The painting is a perfect selection for this piece and leaves me breathless.

Thanks for sharing your romantic heart through your words my very dear friend.

Blessings & warm hugs, ❤️
~ mj

[Richard🖌]

Thank you, Mary Jo,
The lovely entreatments flowing from your words are as a salve administered to a bard's doubt his wares have been received as intended.
How beautifully you grace and assured we've connected on a warmly meaningful level.

Simply a beautiful review, Dear Poetess … big hugs to you! ⁓ Richard : )

[heavenscentgirl1]

Such a sweet & kind response ~ and you can definitely be assured that “your wares have been received as intended”. Big hugs to you dear friend.