I T S ⁓ (envisioning)

I T S ⁓ (envisioning)

A Poem by Richard
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Unmetered Quatrains … unusual mood for me, just something I awoke to on my mind.

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I T S ~


          O’ touch its soft

          caressing care,

          cherish it oft,

          lissomely share.


          Upon the wind

          its lush bouquet,

          within, ascend …

          its charms obey.


          Breathe in its taste,

          adore its motion,

          tightly embraced,

          lured by its potion.

 

          Warmly moist

          its petals’ dew,

          to rise ’n foist

          deeply into.


         'Pon rigid spire

          its rippling grip,

          with surging fire,

          incessant clip …


          there is no quitting

          its captive spell,

         ’til perfectly befitting

          its sating quell.

          

          Richard W. Jenkins

                        © 5 Jan 2018



© 2018 Richard



Author's Note

Richard
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Feel free to critique with anything meant to better my skills! : )

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Seems you've written on behalf of the men who can't express their thoughts of and needs for physical love and its aftermath. Finely put and almostdiscreet le.. except for the small inferences!

Fine writing as always, a subtle examaple of the Unmetered Quadtraine

(Mucha's paintings would please you.)

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard

3 Weeks Ago

Ah, Adolphe Mucha, my favorite art nouveau artiste … what a master at his craft he truly is, and h.. read more
emmajoy

3 Weeks Ago

New avatar is me recovering from a second bout of measle, thirthy two years ago.. with kitty chivers.. read more
Richard

3 Weeks Ago

Have not read Mucha's bio, but on your recommendation.
Your sharing is enjoyed emmajoy.
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Seems you've written on behalf of the men who can't express their thoughts of and needs for physical love and its aftermath. Finely put and almostdiscreet le.. except for the small inferences!

Fine writing as always, a subtle examaple of the Unmetered Quadtraine

(Mucha's paintings would please you.)

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard

3 Weeks Ago

Ah, Adolphe Mucha, my favorite art nouveau artiste … what a master at his craft he truly is, and h.. read more
emmajoy

3 Weeks Ago

New avatar is me recovering from a second bout of measle, thirthy two years ago.. with kitty chivers.. read more
Richard

3 Weeks Ago

Have not read Mucha's bio, but on your recommendation.
Your sharing is enjoyed emmajoy.
.. read more
Well now Richard!... Not sure how well I can review this poem..but I will certainly try. If I would close my eyes and imagine a man so entralled with his lover...this would be it. For me, this speaks of tendernesss, want and desire....satisfaction. IT'S a lovers poem..but, from a mans perspective..this I just LOVE!!.I love the softness...wait! its the appreciation..that I'm picking up...ahhh to feel those feelings from a lover so grateful...what a gift :-)..love the pic.shy and gentle woman..

Posted 1 Month Ago


Susan  Capozzi

1 Month Ago

more...this picture is wonderful. I like it because..of the gentle nature of the woman..It complimen.. read more
Richard

1 Month Ago

Spot-on, Susan!
You've hit the nail square on the head, even adding a warmly sheen with your .. read more
Susan  Capozzi

1 Month Ago

:-) reading again...love this one!!!...ahhhhhh
Warmly moist

its peta.. read more
Richard - truly you speak of love and making love in the most lyrical of forms. You ignite the senses in your passion that will not be denied. I so much enjoy your writing.

Take care - Dave

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard

1 Month Ago

Thank you, Dear Dave,
For sharing your greatly appreciated take, praise, and expressed enjoym.. read more
First of all it's really pretty. The apostrophe is a primmer in meter, thank you for that lesson and tip. I'm at sea about what "it" is. Am I supposed to be?
Is it like a New Yorker cartoon that all get but me?
Maybe that's the point? Maybe one day I'll stop, dead in my tracks, and say "oh".

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard

1 Month Ago

Thank you, Delmar, most gratefully and sincerely for selecting this little mystery journey into the .. read more
Yes, ITS sensational and mysterious like a User who is waiting on the affects of a drug to bring them to a sated quell. Its much different than what you may have intended but its the message I received. I didn’t quite get how the picture fit in with your words unless ITS has another meaning altogether. Yours, Angel

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard

1 Month Ago

Thank you, Dear Angel,
Your time spent in reading, enjoying, and interpreting this piece have.. read more
Yes, it feels like a dream, dreamy, profound, sensational, mysterious, passionate like a real dream must be, there is an ascend ethereal ecstasy, like a spirit rising with the shree glory of the powerful deepest emotions, there is a lure in each (ITS) word, and its verses, that even makes this piece more special and unique, there is amount of bliss and blessings sweep through Your words, like You are in heaven, Your spirit is embraced with the rapture of a prim sensation, a rapturous sensation of rebirthing... this feels not only a dream, but urge us to "a'dream"... the image too, touches my heart in a special way, all of the atmosphere gives me a feeling of ancient love story that still lives till today, from generation to another... like a goddess love, or a myth story.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard

1 Month Ago

Thank you, Dear GH, ever-so warmly, gratefully, and blissfully for your sweet, delightful words to t.. read more

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