Their Heaven⁓* (sensually soft)

Their Heaven⁓* (sensually soft)

A Poem by Richard🖌
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Free Style from the archives: An earlier, very simple poem someone might still enjoy.

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       Their Heaven~*

 

 

                 Supine ...

                        upon bed's edge,

                       lounging fresh from her shower,

                       clothed vibrantly aglow

                       in naught

                       but the luscious allure

                       of soft, golden,

                       sun-kissed skin.

 

                 Stretching out ...

                        smooth legs spread wide,

                       head thrown back ...

                        she rises to lean

                       on straight supple arms,

                        full mane flowing

                        onto the bed

                        like soft,

                       waves of a waterfall,

                       in joyous warm breeze,

                       birdsong from the trees.

 

                 Behind closed eyes

                       rests peaceful tranquility,

                       and the world is somehow set right,

                       reprieved ...

                       in a most wondrous way ~

 

                 Standing ...

                       quietly in the doorway,

                       dreamily drinking-in her glory

                       through his appreciative cerulean eyes,

                       with a reverence nothing

                       on earth could equal.

 

                 He's still ...

                       moments until

                       his frame suddenly,

                       smoothly, silently disrobes

                       gliding easily, quietly,

                       unobtrusively over

                       kneeling down

                       between satin-soft thighs.

 

                 Touching ...

                       a swift inrush

                       of breath harmonizes

                       to sensuous sighs,

                       as his hands slip under

                       embracing her waist

                       in arms strong and firm.

 

                 Forward, he leans ~

                       lifting her easy, yielding form …

                       willing, tender arms

                       wrap 'round his head

                       cradled tight to her bosom,

                       kissing his hair

                       with lips rose petal soft

                       in life-gifting warmth.

 

                 As she slides down ever so slowly ~

                       filling to her core

                       they become as one ...

                       blending heart, soul, and breath,

                       once again evermore.

 

                 In this moment ...

                       he becomes stars,

                       she the vast universe

                       engulfing him;

                       as they glisten and swim,

                       new galaxies form

                       and their heaven ~ is born.

 

 

             Richard W. Jenkins

                         ©1999

© 2022 Richard🖌


Author's Note

Richard🖌
Illustration courtesy of Google Images

Well-meant, constructive critique is always welcomed, considered, and appreciated. : )

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Dearest Richard,
This sensual poem speaks to me even now at my age and sets such a strong mood. There are so many lines..well, actually the entire poem that I connect to.
The ease of the lovers..comfortable.. standing quietly in the doorway...drinking in her glory... oh my.. does that ever remind me of something....
Lisa



Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

2 Years Ago

Beautifully spake, Lisa Dear 🌸

It's not surprising that particular line reminds yo.. read more



Reviews

Dearest Richard,
This sensual poem speaks to me even now at my age and sets such a strong mood. There are so many lines..well, actually the entire poem that I connect to.
The ease of the lovers..comfortable.. standing quietly in the doorway...drinking in her glory... oh my.. does that ever remind me of something....
Lisa



Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

2 Years Ago

Beautifully spake, Lisa Dear 🌸

It's not surprising that particular line reminds yo.. read more
Euphoric. Blissful. Every lover's dream. Words like these will take your readers to 'heaven' and back! How can anyone 'critique' poetry like this but savor the moment these words start to permeate one's being. Thank you for sharing this ultra romantic piece with your readers. A must re read! Thanks again!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

4 Years Ago

Thank you, Dear Kitty,
For coming along on the trip … it was a pleasure to share it with yo.. read more
Richard🖌

4 Years Ago

For your reread, an extra tight hug … ummm* ; )
What a lovely romantic ( softly erotic) scene that plays out in my mind. From start to finish( hehe) this poem just captivates. Really such perfect flowing Free style poem. I always enjoy your work so very much. Thank you.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

4 Years Ago

For you, Lady Susan,
To allow the opportunity for sharing this scintillating piece of etherea.. read more
a poem within a poem which eloquently captures the idea that even though they are equals in the dance of love, he still idolizes the perfection of her, the sensuality of her....and appreciates the heaven they reach together...and she shows that same appreciation.
nicely done.
j.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

4 Years Ago

I can tell, Dear Jacob,
From the stimulating impetus in your words, I am not the only one who.. read more
well i like this freestyle from you this is a genuine gem of passionate flowing lines with a blushing honesty and an open heart to yearnings and a delicious culmination of completion ethereal. This is a gem!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

4 Years Ago

Thank you, Robert : )
Your exuberant expressions of appreciation, enjoyment, and keen, unders.. read more
No critique here, Richard. A soft night of sensuality never hurt anyone. I envy your talent for this ever-inviting genre. :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

4 Years Ago

Thank you sincerely, Dear Tim : )
There always spreads a happy smile across my old mug when I.. read more
' Standing ... quietly in the doorway, - dreamily drinking-in her glory - through his appreciative cerulean eyes, - with a reverence nothing - on earth could equal. '

An honest not quite subtle passion academic, laid in exhaled moments of 'most of us wants to be there'. Your phrasing is finely exclaimed, emotions rich yet with an equal amount of the cerebral and physical! Hence a gasp at its end and rippling applause!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

4 Years Ago

You've my trust and confidence, for what it's worth.
emmajoy

4 Years Ago

Tis a ginormous horticultural commission.. quite a challenge but so very exciting. Tell you more so.. read more
Richard🖌

4 Years Ago

I can imagine no one more dedicated or qualified than You, Em … I know you'll serve proudly, effec.. read more
You will know I am very much attracted to sensual writing, Richard. I enjoyed this no less than other sensual writing of yours. It might be 20 years old (a mere spring chicken, eh?) but is no less impactful. I liked the lines in bold which I found led me into the next verse very naturally.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

4 Years Ago

I suspected as much, Dear Sessy ; )
How happy it makes my olde pen to know you've enjoyed thi.. read more
'Play it again Sam!' Full of sensuality: no stranger to the techniques of love and romance. I see! Taking it slowly for full impact. The sky IS the limit here!. Thank you for sharing this physical contact with your readers!.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

4 Years Ago

Ahhh, Dear lady Kitty 🌸
How sweet, indeed, to see you today, and how warming to receive yo.. read more
kitty

4 Years Ago

Always happy to read words that put life into the heart and soul of me! Thank you for providing the .. read more
Richard🖌

4 Years Ago

Always, Kitty, my sincere pleasure.

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