Awake and haunted

Afterlife

I hear banging at night from outside my room
And in the gloom I'm sure meet my doom
I'm scared of the darkness surrounding me
I'm scared of things that I might see
The one outside won't be ignored
It never stops it won't get bored
Why are you even haunting me
Tell me why and let me be
When sunrise come you disappear
And with it all my pain and fear
Even though it scares me blind
I'm curious of what I might find
Where did you live, how did you die?
Had you ever the chance to say goodbye?
What will complete you, what can I do?
Stop banging now and I'll come to you
If I don't help, if I ignore
One day it might be me standing banging on that door

Reviews

[Lerew]

A few typos here and there

[Dupen Babbar]

Hi Richie. I am new into writing and i don't think i have the right to judge anyone who is more experienced then me. Though i really loved your work :) Few lines made me go to my childhood when i was scared of dark. :)