Sweeter

senryu

If you can focus

on the taste of one berry

life will be sweeter

Author's Note

captcha: dosology

Reviews

[Maryam]

So true. Amazing how simple things in life can seem so complicated sometimes. Thank you for reminding us to go back to basics.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thanks for reading, Maryam!

[Cassie]

yes yes...the message in this poem is so true. Thank you gal for sharing

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Cassie - glad you liked this simple piece.

[Baby Ricochet]

Great Senryu...................................

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Mark.

[Ang Boyce]

These are wise words Rita L.
So often we get overwhelmed and its good to focus on something positive.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Ang.

[Marie]

Yes, I entirely agree...a strawberry...

[Rita L. Sev]

Mmm... :) (maybe dipped in chocolate...)

[Lydia Shutter]

Indeed, there is always something to be grateful for....something sweet...no matter how sour the day might seem. This is uplifting and wise. Lydi**

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Lydi!

[Angi]

That captcha thing is creepy, sometimes! Dosology indeed. Rita, I try every single day to NOT gobble up all my berries at once! Great reminder to slow down and really be aware of the little things. Love this! Angi~

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Angi. Some days there are just so many berries... but I can only savor one at a time... Mindful living. :)

[prachi prangya agasti]

great words... inspirational...

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Prachi...

[Sharon Kim]

Wise words, Rita! Too often we're in such a rush to get to the next thing that we don't take time to savor and appreciate the steps along the way. Nicely done!

[Rita L. Sev]

Exactly! Thank you, Sharon!

[ShelleyA]

Hi Rita. Lovely words to live by. Much wisdom in this senryu. Excellent use of brevity. A very encouraging piece. Well penned and a good read. Write on!

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you Shelley! Have a great Saturday!

[ShelleyA]

You're welcome Rita. Have a great weekend!