Frosted

Frosted

A Poem by Rita L. Sev
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White frosted branches

tasted from a warm armchair

the sweetest of treats

© 2015 Rita L. Sev


Author's Note

Rita L. Sev
Looking at the tree across the street the other day...

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yep! sure is ...all things warm are that way in the winter .. read it to savor a second time and realized it is a senryu :} ... i can be so dense ;) i am glad i found this one Rita .. my life has slowed down so wonderfully that i notice daily changes ..and tho the temps in our new Ozark Mountain home dip rarely to freezing .. winter is only a breath away .. so .. i am more prepared after reading this one .. don't forget to keep posting anew my friend .. tho you arte probably quite busy with a new school year eh!? .. love and peace
E.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

7 Years Ago

With tems near 95 today, I am glad you directed me here, E! New school year, settling in to the new .. read more
Einstein Noodle

7 Years Ago

love and peace in the chaos! ;)
Tastes yummy, I can see it too, thanks Rita............AGT's Neville

Posted 8 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

8 Years Ago

This was written on a cold day, while today I see sunshine out the same window... ah, the cycle of L.. read more
Neville

8 Years Ago

My pleasure, N
Ah yes...the best way to see the snow is on TV from South Florida! :) I liked this. Lydi**

Posted 9 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

9 Years Ago

Lol! I'll be sure to send you some snow next winter! Thanks, Lydi!
I'll bet they taste like marshmallws.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

9 Years Ago

Mmmmmm... mmmarshmmmallows... :)
that snow really looks even more beautiful when viewed from the comfort and coziness of inside in an armchair...nice senryu.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

9 Years Ago

Thank you, Jacob - yes, a reminder of my great fortune...
I concur Rita - any weather (except sunny), I find is best viewed from the warmth of the couch and a cup o tea. Dear poet, I like your style... ;)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

9 Years Ago

Always looking for a bright side! Thanks, Anto!
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Yummy! Winter as a York peppermint patty :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

9 Years Ago

Mmm! Cool and sweet! ;) Thank you, Lynn!

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Added on March 8, 2015
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Rita L. Sev
Rita L. Sev

Philadelphia, PA



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