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A Poem by Rita L. Sev
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She played a game of hide and seek,

donned best friend masks

and took a peek,

found the soft spots at my core,

used me up

then sought no more

wary now,

I will not count ~

the game too grueling to surmount. 


© 2015 Rita L. Sev



Author's Note

Rita L. Sev
Just reminiscing, and finding an old hurt...

captcha: offense

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oh the "user" ... beware soft hearts .. beware! .... leaving tatters behind they "Skip To Ma Luu" happily down the street .. i have no doubt that somewhere down that road life will most assuredly teach its lesson ..so let them go i say ...
and never a more appropriate captcha .. how does it know? ;)
E.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

2 Years Ago

Good advice, E... and yes, the captcha freaked me out! Thanks!
and i refuse to close my eyes and trust...the game is over.

bitterness exudes here, but well founded., and well expressed.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

2 Years Ago

Thank you, Jacob...
"found the soft spots at my core,
used me up
then sought no more"

Posted 2 Years Ago


Games can be for fun, competition, revenge or just merely sportsmanship. We have to be on alert and courageous to win and play by the rules so to speak. This had a reminiscent tone to it. Excellent...:)........

Posted 2 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

2 Years Ago

Thank you, Sami.
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

You are welcome. ...:).......

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