Work To Peace?

Work To Peace?

A Poem by Riya patel

The lightning was all around me,
But I was lost in my own darkness,
The only thing that I can see,
Was a long narrow path to success.


The pain is so high,
But the gain is worth it,
Now don't you cry, 
The thing that is taken into account is your submit.


If it was easy,
Everyone would have done this,
Right now you will find yourself silly,
Working when others are at peace.

© 2016 Riya patel



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These are inspiring words and motivates one to work harder to achieve his or her goal.

Good job.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Riya patel

10 Months Ago

thank u so much
Good one. Hope to see more of your such writings

Posted 10 Months Ago


Riya patel

10 Months Ago

thank you so much
This words are the truth of life but to realize it takes a lot of time really well written

Posted 10 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Riya patel

10 Months Ago

Thank u so much

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Riya patel
Riya patel

mumbai, India



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