TV

Your hands were like something from the TV

 

A fleeting feeling

Imaginatively appealing

 

But we don’t know each other

And maybe that’s where it’s best

 

Just like the strangers on the show

 

We can just switch it off when were done

And if were bored perhaps we could have a rerun

 

Though the most appeasing

And the most pleasing

 

Please don’t change the channel

You just turned me on..

Reviews

[Little Birdie]

Made me laugh, this is so great and twisted.

[Indigo Ribbon]

the comparison is quite imaginative! Great job =]

[Raven Starhawk]

Such a well conceived poem.

[OnceUponAMelody]

The last line made me smile. I like this. There's no particular organization and yet it still flows well, so nice job there. The variation of the length of the lines and the rhyme scheme avoided monotony and kept it going. Interesting metaphor here, a short read but a good one. Nice job.

[Black-Draped]

i like this it's another interpretation of TV =3

[SuddenCognito]

ahaha :) nice