Drive

Drive

A Poem by Robyn

As the cool summer breeze kisses my skin,
I open my eyes to the world around me.
A panorama of beauty surrounds me
and engulfs my being.

 

My soul is immersed in the
cool river of new life.

 

Cleanse and Renew.

 

Sunlight dances across my bare shoulders.
I feel every harmony resonating
through my entire body.
The story plays out in my mind.

My imagination spills over the brim.


Absorbed in all
my senses.

 

Light and Sound.

© 2010 Robyn


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Nature always puts us in awe, God's beauty in creation is something beyond words... well written poem, good luck in the contest...

Posted 13 Years Ago


Serene piece... I love the imagery. Great piece. c:

Posted 13 Years Ago


a gorgeous reconnect to the natural world~

Posted 13 Years Ago


this is a beautiful and peacful read

Posted 13 Years Ago


I can feel this poem. It is very evocative, a very pleasant read. I wrote one called "A Quiet Place" and this one reminds me a lot of that. "Sunlight dances across my bare shoulders." is a very good line. Well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


very nice, there is a really beautiful calming, meditative quality about it, and overall it's a lovely portrait of sunkissed days on the road... i like how you included those brief flashes of sensation of 'cleanse and renew' and 'light and sound' -- very cerebral... much enjoyed! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Robyn
Robyn

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