Night

She paints the stars with her tears on a moonless night

The cool night wind, echoes her yearning.

An enchanting lullaby,
The sky is filled with falling stars.

Bewitched, he stares out his window.
Captivated, by the euphonic whistling of the wind

It stirs a passion in him
A radiant heat,
that pierces through the once still night.

The wind, swirls and swirls beckoning him,
in a seductive, rhythmic dance

Turning her once darkened night,
A summer's day

Like the Sun, caressing her skin
his warmth, illuminating her,
till she glows an alabaster white, gleaming in his brilliance.

Her silk and lace,
now the color of blood
against her soft, pale flesh

She smiles, through starlit tears
as his light, kisses her lips,
in a sweet embrace

Igniting a fiery passion,
As their energies collide
In Eternal flame

Author's Note

This is a Rampling of whatever came to mind. Will edit it eventually

Reviews

[ANTO]

'euphonic' - sublime word choice here - new to me - thank you.

"Turning her once darkened night,
A summer's day " - I really like the turn of phrase here. I would struggle to be this free with words - having to insert the word 'to' (A Summer's day). You give me the confidence to be more loose with the words on the page and to not corral them.

An education for me here Roma J. thank you for posting this.

[RomaJ]

Euphonic, is such a fun word. It resonated with me and I've always wanted to incorporate into a poem. When I stopped thinking too hard about it just flowed. And thank you for this kind review.
I always struggle with words on my pieces and end up editing it constantly. Lol but thank you again,Anto

[ANTO]

Editing is a double edged sword, isn't it? We can go overboard and lose the feel but without it work can seem sloppy. We are all learning.
you're very welcome Roma J

[RomaJ]

Yes . and a major headache . if we overthink :)

[Philip Muls]

Very passionate and genuine. Well done.

[Emily]

Love it!
It kind of inspires me.
It kind of makes me think about what can happen in the dark.
Well done!

[wordman]

a beautiful write,full of passion.love your word choices

[RomaJ]

Aww thank you wordman, I'm really glad you like it:)

[wordman]

i like all your writes roma,you are a great writer

[RomaJ]

Aww thank you, wordman. truly appreciate it, especially because you're the Great writer and also, a great friend.

[wordman]

great friend yes,writer i have my doubts lol

[Ben Noah Suri]

You really had me from the very beginning. "She paints the stars with her tears on a moonless night" these words reveal your creative depth. Wow! You've got a fan here

[RomaJ]

Than you for your kind reviews.

[613]

Favorite line: "She smiles, through starlit tears"

This is a stunning poem! I loved everything about this.

- Brittney

[andrew mitchell]

This is like the perfect adult lullaby to read to your lover to a blissful sleep. It is just so soft and smooth in flow and verse

[RomaJ]

Thank you so much. I was worried about the flow. Your very kind.

[Relic]

I think its fine the way it is myself. The similes are striking and are intriguing at the same time. This is excellent work Roma. I like this very much.

[Relic]

You're quite welcome.

[RomaJ]

Always a pleasure :) and good evenings to you or shall I say, Night. Seems fitting.

[Relic]

The same to you Roma. :)