Ouch!

Ouch!

A Poem by Antonio

             OUCH!

       ouch,

         i stepped on a rock.

      ouch,

            i got stung by a bee.

      ouch,

          i got stuffed in a locker.

      ouch,

          i got hit by a bus.

      ouch,

         im dead.

© 2009 Antonio


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Yikes! That would suck, lol! Excellent poem. That last line caught me off guard, but made me laugh. Very, very nice work. :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


yeah! but if your dead you can't feel the ouch, I can get what you're saying too cute of a write, well done.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Antonio
Antonio

Newportnews, VA



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I am a 13 and i live in Virginia.also i have good grade s in schooland i love to write poems and storys about fantasy and realistic fiction. My name is antonio i am purto rican. I also can speak a lit.. more..

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