sweet memories

Sweet Memories

 

The sun shines rays of brilliant splendor across the sea

The effect cuases me to feel intoxicated and free

It brings the sweet memories back to me

Walking close by my mother

Picking flowers in the grass so green

On are walk along the big blue sea

 

The Smell of the ocean travels through my senses

For a moment I feel pure bliss

Then I realize life was meant for moments like these

The wind begins to blow through the trees

They seem to sing a song that agrees with me

 

I feel the moment take control of me

I grab my daughters hands and we begin to dance so free

The flowers the trees the chimes sing

They combine to make the song perfect for dancing by the sea

And I think about this one day becoming one of annies sweet memories

Reviews

[Sarah]

This is so sweet - I love it! The idea of walking along the beach with your daughter, and reminiscing upon the times when you used to do that with your own mother is magical and just a beautiful image. =) I love the line "Then I realize life was meant for moments like these" (this is exactly what I think when I'm out on the water!) Great job with this! One typo I noticed: "On are walk along the big blue sea" should be "our". Otherwise, I really enjoyed reading this!

[MelyG.]

aaaahhhhhhhh so deep...i can actually close my eyes and picture all this

[Your Tasty Field Adviso..]

i feel this way so much. i can just smell a sertain smell and millions of memories pop into my brain from that smell. i could also see something that does the same thing. but, it happens more so with smells. its really wierd. anyway, i do love your poem. great piece of art

[RHEA CROSLEY]

I like the transition from one generation through you to another generation.

[Timothy]

This is a very deep and beautiful poem, im glad you shared it with me.