your life

your life

A Poem by Rosary

sliced wrist

stumbling

drugged

collapsing

yelling

screaming

loving

hanging

unconcious

hospital

overdose

crying

pain

weekness

poverty

lying

trying

screaming

crying

silence

blue face

overdosing

dying

 


© 2008 Rosary



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Nice piece hun, am wondering who black seal is though, and you messaged me three times, have you mistaken me for someone else.

Dawn

Posted 10 Years Ago


When the word hospital fit into the puzzle here my mind flooded with images from bad memories. I like the machine gun rhythm that crescendos at the end:
"lying

trying

screaming

crying

silence

blue face

overdosing

dying"

this would make a very very good spoken word piece, nice work.



Posted 10 Years Ago



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Rosary
Rosary

Charleston, SC



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