Love Spell #18

You think of me I know you do
All night when you pray in moonlight
And when the moon goes down at dawn
You get reminded by the Sun

And when you watch the waters flow
With gentle stroke you touch my soul
And in the leaf of every tree
You see a little piece of me

No matter how far you will run
In web of life through love and light
In all infinity of time 

We are connected to be one

Reviews

[Oyindamola Shoola]

i love the poem, the last stanza especially and i love your choice of words in this poem, the sun, moonlight, the leaf....you made very good use of it and have created good sense of imagery with it. this poem is indeed a love spell and i wish this was the way love is....well penned.

[Oyindamola Shoola]

this poem is indeed a love spell....I love the last stanza very much and you have made good sense of imagery with words you used moonlight, moon, sun and it has made this poem just perfectly beautiful

[Richard]

Haha I love the real sort of arrogance of this. Like you're certain you're loved and touched and stroked and thought of. I really like that. :) and it's really well written I suppose I should probably add.

[Clockwork]

There are a lot of love poems on this site, but you identify a different level of love. It is a deep soul sort of love that connects all things no matter the place or the time. It is transcendent and it identifies the thread of life in all things. It is the kind of love that resits bitterness and opens the eyes for learning and light. I greatly enjoyed this.

[Royal Phoenix]

:) awww thank you! I appreciate such a lovely review! The Love I carry within is unconditional! It's towards everything that is! We are one with the Universe and that is incredibly powerful!

[Clockwork]

Your welcome. That is quite a wonderful way to live, to see and feel the indivisible nature and love of that light and truth.

[JordanLane]

Great poem obviously you had your intentions but where this piece transcends is in its exact abstractness

[Royal Phoenix]

true, I had very particular intensions writing this piece.. every word in it carries a particular meaning to me, but I believe, each reader will understand it in their own way, depending on how much this poem reflects their own life :)

[Tate Morgan]

That is a very interesting idea.I liked it .Hope its true for you and whomever makes you happy

[Royal Phoenix]

thank you!

[Jason Dyer]

I love the infinite implications with the tree leaves.

[Royal Phoenix]

thank you! EXACTLY! one can find leaves almost anywhere on this planet :)