I Set You Free

I Set You Free

A Poem by Nihad Dweidary
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Photography by Nihad

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I set you free
to emerge, to vanish,
like the casual angel
who rests upon my shoulder,
to search the heavenlies
for words of deliverance
and feast your soul
upon the honeyed nectar of proximity.

I set you free
to travel across a continuum
of timeless dunes of spherical dust,
and orbs that space can not define,
to poise yourself,
atop of glistening desert triangles
burning in the solvent sun
of distant, meandering thought.

I give to you anointed passage
toward a cryptic key clairvoyant
to unlock the many secrets
of the world and its endless splendor,
to burn these heavy coals
that fuel the furnace in your heart
until it is pieced collectively
in mosaic with my own.


© 2008 Nihad Dweidary



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Hey, wow! Let my join the chorus of approbation … so many memorable conceptual images.




Posted 6 Years Ago


Satisfaction relaxed the nerves and muscles and wave hands in the air total free feel, Nice narration.........

Posted 6 Years Ago


read mine too "QUEST OF LIFE"


Posted 6 Years Ago


nice one

Posted 6 Years Ago


"CASUAL ANGEL"...just is not the word needed...did you think of any otheres...empiric? legion?

Posted 7 Years Ago


The greatest one can give another is the freedom to find their authentic self. Not to be threatened by it, but to celebrate it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Only those who truly sit and familiarize themselves with their surroundings could put forth such a "natural" piece. Words are granted like gifts. The more you experience, the more vocabulary you acquire. Not just words of high definition... but descriptions of high definition.

Very nice.

~Li

Posted 8 Years Ago


This poem - like all your others, is beautiful.

' .. burning in the solvent sun / of distant, meandering thought. '

I swear you're a merman who lures reader's into his own oceanic world!

You certainly have a way with words, that's for sure. Thank you for sharing them ..



Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Loving your work as always...

freedom which voluntarily surrenders itself to another's keeping is expressing the ultimate confidence.

Linda Marie

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Nihad Dweidary
Nihad Dweidary

Pacific Grove, CA



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""This poem is like looking at a photograph, taken in the very earliest days of photography, and seeing love in the unsmiling faces and too-bright eyes that were so common in such photos. The poem see.. more..

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