Not my everything

You are not my everything

You are special

But you cant be everything

I'll break my own heart

Wishing you could

You are not my everything

You are important

but there is happiness outside of you

When the we isnt sweet

I can smile still

You are not my everything

Author's Note

I need some good critique on structure

Reviews

[G.A. Grim]

Love the title and its a good poem. I believe the rhythm could be improved if you evened out the stanzas somewhat. Last line had a nice punch to it.
- George

[RBrmdz]

Thank you for the feedback. I find it super helpful to improve my skills.