Anxiety

Anxiety

A Poem by RBrmdz
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Random freewrite

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Vibrating ribcage

I squeeze my hands together

It doesnt hide the trembling

Forced breaths

Bile rises

Eyes burn

Face Damp

Goosebumps

Impending danger

And the world keeps spinning

© 2018 RBrmdz


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The ending line is the spotlight in this poem, because it made me think with two things, when You are in Your own trouble, how the world around You is the same, giving two ideas, the first one how each one is in her/his own situation apart from all else, while all else is still the same, alone like they are not of a part of this rounding world, while everything seem to change but the situation stays the same, and I'm reminded here of humanity here, second, how this world keeps on rounding, just giving a chance that things will change, two ideas, negative and positive, I hope it's not how You are feeling right now, I feel a one hides their own anxiety, bury it for themselves, at the same time I feel a six sense.

Take care of Yourself my friend, all the best*

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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The ending line is the spotlight in this poem, because it made me think with two things, when You are in Your own trouble, how the world around You is the same, giving two ideas, the first one how each one is in her/his own situation apart from all else, while all else is still the same, alone like they are not of a part of this rounding world, while everything seem to change but the situation stays the same, and I'm reminded here of humanity here, second, how this world keeps on rounding, just giving a chance that things will change, two ideas, negative and positive, I hope it's not how You are feeling right now, I feel a one hides their own anxiety, bury it for themselves, at the same time I feel a six sense.

Take care of Yourself my friend, all the best*

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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