Autumn sound

Autumn sound

A Poem by Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere
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A symphony of colours.

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Voices that keep quit

from words fallen leaves

silent colours flutter down

 

further on chatters

only the stream uphill

against the sword-grass or a tree

 

take something red, something yellow

meandering in velocity

it’s full of sound

and supposition

 

becoming brown, browner still

 

till they are earth

and sink between the cobblestones

for ever drowned in autumn.

 

© Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

© 2014 Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere


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Fall is my favorite season . It has something to do perhaps with those arrays of exploding colours . Just makes the scene bursting with life and gladness . Here you wrote that colours have sounds . Perhaps they fo sends messages same way we send message when we give someone a flowers . I tried to pen a piece but I lack the vocabulary to even capture the beauty of the thought or scene . But yiou did so well here Rudi . Thanks for sharing your interest and talent .

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

9 Years Ago

Thank you Neil for taking time to read so many writings and to give such a wonderful review. :) Rud.. read more



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I love your use of colors
How you blend them into this palate of words
To arrive at the perfect shades of Autumn
Magical write

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

8 Years Ago

Thank you, Nisreen, Mother Nature is a great subject to write about, it's a never ending story. :) .. read more
This is a great poem and the picture is really gorgeous.
Excellent language too!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much for reading and for your favourable comment. :) Rudi
Well expresses the delight and dread of the fall season. Vibrant color like a funeral cortege before the going to earth.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

9 Years Ago

Thank you, Delmar. Glad you took some time to read my poem. How are you? :) Rudi
Delmar Cooper

9 Years Ago

I am well, my computer is sick.
Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

9 Years Ago

Sorry to hear that.
Congratulations!
This piece is a finalist in Promote Me! IX.
By 1.31.2015, vote for this piece here: http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/Promote-Me%21-IX-%28Seasons%29/50662/

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much. Glad to be part of it. :) Rudi
Fall is my favorite season . It has something to do perhaps with those arrays of exploding colours . Just makes the scene bursting with life and gladness . Here you wrote that colours have sounds . Perhaps they fo sends messages same way we send message when we give someone a flowers . I tried to pen a piece but I lack the vocabulary to even capture the beauty of the thought or scene . But yiou did so well here Rudi . Thanks for sharing your interest and talent .

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

9 Years Ago

Thank you Neil for taking time to read so many writings and to give such a wonderful review. :) Rud.. read more
'.. further on chatters .. only the stream uphill .. against the sword-grass or a tree.. '

So often people write of Autumn colours so, tis such a pleasure to read about its sounds!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

9 Years Ago

Thank you Emma, I'm a great fan of nature.

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Added on November 1, 2014
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Tags: autumn, leaves, chatter, red, yellow, brown

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Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere
Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

Wingene, West-Vlaanderen, Belgium



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I'm from Belgium. English is not my native language, but I like to read English poems and books. I have written a lot of Dutch poems during the last forty years. With some of them I've got prizes in B.. more..

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