Captivating

Captivating

A Poem by Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere
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For eternity...and longer.

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I want to be the seed and the fruit

your cross pollination,

a hummingbird

the turmeric in your mustard

 

at least the lines

on the leave

my rosemary

 

where I shall write

some words between

eternally green

eternally captivating

 

anointed with the blue

of lavender

sky of the heaven

squeezed

 

out of two rainbows

I want to live in you.

 

© Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere


© 2014 Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere



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Wow ... what a grandeur description . The herbs and spices permeating . The tumeric and rosemary . Don't we all dream that sometimes . We want to have both of best world . Two rainbows ? That is an exceptional wish and request . I can see the depth of your imagination here Rudi . Expressing it through surroundings and nature .

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

2 Years Ago

What can I say to such loving words, thank you so much, Neil. Glad you liked it. :) Rudi



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This one has a lot of passion! It feels good to be a part of someone else's life.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

2 Years Ago

Thank you, Matt, for passing by and reading my poem. :) Rudi
beautiful colours and poetry here Rudi, with spice and herbs in the mix its a veritable feast of love, bravo :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

2 Years Ago

Thank you, Richard. Glad you loved this poem of mine. :) Rudi
Wow ... what a grandeur description . The herbs and spices permeating . The tumeric and rosemary . Don't we all dream that sometimes . We want to have both of best world . Two rainbows ? That is an exceptional wish and request . I can see the depth of your imagination here Rudi . Expressing it through surroundings and nature .

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

2 Years Ago

What can I say to such loving words, thank you so much, Neil. Glad you liked it. :) Rudi
'I want to live in you.'

Whilst a few words aren't quite correct, your intended beauty and meaning is laid so very well.

Your English is a billion times better than either my Dutch or Belgian... congratulations!

Welcome to the Cafe.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

2 Years Ago

Is it possible you could tell me what words aren't correct? It's always good to have constructive cr.. read more
emmajoy

2 Years Ago

Though certainly not an expert will be glad to help. However, really MUST do some work now; will con.. read more
Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

2 Years Ago

Okay, thanks.
Rich words....
nice romance

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

2 Years Ago

Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it.
Udeokechukwu chidiebere

2 Years Ago

welcome...keep up the good work

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Added on November 1, 2014
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Tags: captivating, seed, fruit, hummingbird, leave, lavender

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Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere
Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

Wingene, West-Vlaanderen, Belgium



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I'm from Belgium. English is not my native language, but I like to read English poems and books. I have written a lot of Dutch poems during the last forty years. With some of them I've got prizes in B.. more..

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