A good start

A good start

A Poem by Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere
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Start every day with a smile and get it over with. W.C. Fields

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Just like the dew droplets on the blades of grass,

jewellery that glitters as the stars

in the light of the morning that awakes,

I am walking between these little rainbows,

a wondering way past little miracles,

 

the silver on the web of the spider

that shivers in the morning breeze,

the shiny and mystery track of the snail

on the step stones

before the house,

 

the blackbird that begins the day

with a free concert

and the wind whispering his words

between the leaves of the tree,

 

it’s a poem that is reciting itself,

a never-ending story,

a song that is never the same,

 

I’m humming an air of happiness,

it’s a good start of my day.

 

© Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

© 2015 Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere


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Very nice use of words and thoughts.
"it’s a poem that is reciting itself,
a never-ending story,
a song that is never the same,"
When life and poetry flow out with ease. Always a good day. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote



Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

8 Years Ago

Thank you, John, for visiting and reading my poetry. :) Rudi
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You are welcome Rudi.



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Very nice use of words and thoughts.
"it’s a poem that is reciting itself,
a never-ending story,
a song that is never the same,"
When life and poetry flow out with ease. Always a good day. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote



Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

8 Years Ago

Thank you, John, for visiting and reading my poetry. :) Rudi
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You are welcome Rudi.
Wow :-) this poems speaks of itself so clearly. I am sure your day us still super.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

8 Years Ago

Thank you again, Cassie, for passing by and reading my writing. :) Rudi
Beautiful words of daybreak and great imagery. Well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

8 Years Ago

Thank you, Willard, for your nice comment. :) Rudi
It's poetry like this that makes me proud to be a writer.

I'm a daily jogger, and I usually get my time in early in the morning. To actually witness that kind of awakening, as you described here with the spider and the blackbird, simply invigorates one's soul!

"I’m humming an air of happiness,
it’s a good start of my day."

...I couldn't have said it better! How sweet it is!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

8 Years Ago

Thank you, Kelly, glad I could make you feel like that. Have a good weekend, my friend. :) Rudi
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I see so much relativity here
So much earth

In a way a divine write
It speaks to life
Illusive yet so clear

Stunning

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

8 Years Ago

Thank you, Nisreen, for the nice comment. Glad you liked this one too. :) Rudi
This is beautiful, Rudi. Great imagery. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

8 Years Ago

Thank you, Matt, for taking time to read and review my poem. :) Rudi
caught myself humming along with you, Rudi...thanks for this inspiring tribute to nature and starting the day with a smile...wonderful poetry, my friend

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

8 Years Ago

Thank you, FT, for reading and reviewing. Have a good day, my friend. :) Rudi
You have a great appreciation for nature. I liked this poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

8 Years Ago

Thank you, Hakim, for your nice comment. Indeed I like writing about nature. :) Rudi
I agree with the rest on this one, quite the beautiful work of art

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

9 Years Ago

Thank you, comming from you means a lot to me. Glad you enjoyed it.
beautiful comparisons .....artistic indeed !

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Tags: grass, droplet, light, morning, rainbow, silver, web, spider, mystery, snail, blackbird, song, happy

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Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere
Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

Wingene, West-Vlaanderen, Belgium



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I'm from Belgium. English is not my native language, but I like to read English poems and books. I have written a lot of Dutch poems during the last forty years. With some of them I've got prizes in B.. more..

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