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Brain fog

Brain fog

A Poem by Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere
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Derive happiness in oneself from a good day's work, from illuminating the fog that surrounds us. Henri Matisse

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Brain fog and webbing words

I want to tie the sounds together

to let them ring and bump and sizzle

a firework of sparkling whistles

to grow into a being,

to string them in a lace of senses

 

give them colour in a foreign tale,

telling about smelling and singing

a song about courageous fellows

goblins, gnomes and trolls or upside down

helter-skelter and turn around

 

I want to swim and dive in teary rivers,

roaring in an overwhelming laughter

and afterwards a tenderly and softly fondling

just learn to kiss and love

to write with them for ever and ever.

 

© Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

08/03/2015

© 2015 Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere


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So much goes through a writer's mind that it is difficult sometimes to quell the noise long enough to organize the cacophony of sounds into meaningful thoughts which we then interpret for emotional values before creating words and sentences in order to shed light on those original thoughts. I enjoyed this piece very much and like how you weave the senses throughout as they help capture the very way in which we eventually create a piece worth sharing. A nice write Rudi! - FT

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

9 Years Ago

Thank you, FT, for going through the written fog of my brain. :) Rudi
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9 Years Ago

You are kindly welcome sir! - FT



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"i want to swim and dive in teary rivers" beautiful writing.


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

9 Years Ago

Thank you, Sereenaoutloud, for passing by and reading. :) Rudi
A poet can find beauty in the most ordinary of things....You are a true poet and your poem is lovely Rudi!

:) Julie

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

9 Years Ago

Thank you, Julie. Glad you liked it. Have a fine day. :) Rudi
Another masterpiece: You Rudy are a brilliant poet .....To capture the essense of emotions: When I read your poems they are unique: I would know a Rudi Lejaeghere poem. You are so talented when I read all desires are wiped away. Beautiful. Thank you. Dale
Brain fog and webbing words
I want to tie the sounds together
to let them ring and bump and sizzle
a firework of sparkling whistles
to grow into a being,
to string them in a lace of senses


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Confuser

9 Years Ago

I live it!! Great writing; but I do know what you mean: I can be alone, look at the stars, words a.. read more
Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

9 Years Ago

Glad you're happy. Have a nice day. :) Rudi
Confuser

9 Years Ago

You too Rudy. Thanks.:].....Dale
Our clouded foggy brains, yes I can totally relate! Fantastic write and
creative, to go with a gorgeous picture, you did it again my friend!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

9 Years Ago

Thank you, James. I've heard the term in Dutch 'Hersenmist' and I did find it such a beautiful word .. read more
So much goes through a writer's mind that it is difficult sometimes to quell the noise long enough to organize the cacophony of sounds into meaningful thoughts which we then interpret for emotional values before creating words and sentences in order to shed light on those original thoughts. I enjoyed this piece very much and like how you weave the senses throughout as they help capture the very way in which we eventually create a piece worth sharing. A nice write Rudi! - FT

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

9 Years Ago

Thank you, FT, for going through the written fog of my brain. :) Rudi
....................

9 Years Ago

You are kindly welcome sir! - FT

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Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere
Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

Wingene, West-Vlaanderen, Belgium



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I'm from Belgium. English is not my native language, but I like to read English poems and books. I have written a lot of Dutch poems during the last forty years. With some of them I've got prizes in B.. more..

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