This Pain of Mine

This Pain of Mine

A Poem by RxQueen
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The pain only certain human will truly understand.

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There are so many reasons to call it quits
The tragedy of loving and being ignored
Your feelings are not enough to get the attention of the one you've given your heart away to
Could this really be what love is?
I look at your face to memorize it
I take away your pain when you are down
I give my life for you time and time again
But you refuse to do the same 
You see the pain within me 
You look through me and into my soul
And still you carry on with your own life
You carry own like I never even mattered
You torment me with your presence
You hurt me with your words
Yet I am here
I have been here and it goes unnoticed
You are my light
You are my darkness
I can be your one 
As you have been mine
But I am quickly realizing I am alone
There is no place for me
There is no love for me
So please just let me cradle myself with this pain of mine



© 2017 RxQueen



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Cradle yourself with the pain and then stand up stronger .

Posted 2 Days Ago


a poem that many can relate to,pouring out your heart and soul

Posted 1 Month Ago


"Yet I am here
I have been here and it goes unnoticed" . That part truly touched me. Thank you for this poem.

Posted 1 Month Ago


RxQueen

1 Month Ago

Thank you for reading!
Wow. Moving poem. I really like how you closed it out with the imagery of the narrator cradling themselves with their pain.

Posted 1 Month Ago


RxQueen

1 Month Ago

I appreciate your feedback. Thank you!
That was beautiful and touching. It really spoke to me. Really well written

Posted 1 Month Ago


RxQueen

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much and thank you for reading!
This is a really good poem. I feel I can almost relate to everything you have written in this.

Posted 1 Month Ago


RxQueen

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much for your comment. ❤

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Added on October 11, 2017
Last Updated on October 11, 2017
Tags: pain, misery, love, loss, anger, sadness

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