005.

June 29, 2008

Let your love flow outward through the universe,
To its height, its depth, its broad extent,
A limitless love, without hatred or enmity.
Then as you stand or walk,
Sit or lie down,
As long as you are awake,
Strive for this with a one-pointed mind;
Your life will bring heaven to earth.

Reviews

[Michael X]

not a very good nor insightful ending. because the last line goes without being said. if you can rework the ending to more depthfully original perspective then i feel this poem would hold solid weight.
keep up the great work.

[Denise Deas]

This is absolutely beautiful!!!!!!!!!! I'm so speechless!!!