Hypocrites

HYPOCRITES 

 

You ignorant fools

You pathetic beings

you malevolent b******s

You heretic of truth

 

You are as two faced as a coin  

The only thing that you can do  

the only thing thats tride and true, 

for you is.... a bold faced lie! 

 

Your existance is pointless

Your being is empty

You deserve to die

for your life is a lie!

 

 

 

Author's Note

i might add more later.

Reviews

[Gabrielle]

I know, those stupid hypocrites!! Nice poem, I enjoyed the read. Try adding some more emotion and depth, and you will be unbeatable! :)

[Chaos]

This is obvious that you wanted to express anger and rage, but where is the connection to the person this is about. I love the flow and the meaning, but you leave longing for the connection between the two characters. What did the character do to cause such anger? How did the other respond? How was the angry character betrayed? Just thoughts that slammed through me as I read your art work. Nice write!

[Mariana Silva]

If you do add more, it would make for a wonderful poem to send to someone who could fit that poem easily. Good job

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

HAHA... rants...

I love the rage in here. Hypocrites suck... I should know because I go to school with a ridiculous crap load. As bad as my comment is going to sound (as a Catholic, that is), I fully agree with your position, whether it's just a well-styled poem or an authentic rant...

Excellent work. I'm a sucker for adjectives.

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood

[babygirl hernandez]

this is very well said. it shows what a hypocrite is

[Fear Corrupts!]

haha I like this one. I totally agree with you...two faced people do have a pointless existance. Congrats.

[The Mad Prophet]

Here Here! Awsome, and true. I know a few hypocrites that I would like to see gone, for good. The Church, Most Political Based things, Hospitals and Medical System, and alot of people. Very well done.

[Simplicity]

A dark poem. I think it's very true when it comes to most people, even the reader themselves at times. Great piece.