A FAIR ATTEMPT

A FAIR ATTEMPT

A Poem by SHEEMA HUQ
"

abstract art poetry

"

 

amateur,

fine point,

fastidious,

flamboyant,

obscuring

the

outer form

with a

sparsely

developed,

unpractised

style,

depicting

a lurid,

deferential

three

quarter

length

pro

fi

le

.

 


© 2013 SHEEMA HUQ



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this is also known as a 'pattern poetry'. i'm surprised to find your subject versed so tersely and intricately. not only has the description of an 'amateur' been made enticingly but, the picture deriving from the words with varying syllables is also artistic. from my perspective, i see the exterior of a lady on your verse. it might be meant to reflect a female character with crude self-growth. i wonder if my eyes have deceived me.

Posted 4 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

SHEEMA HUQ

4 Years Ago

Hi Reeti
I'm really flattered that you should stop by and comment and I'm pleased that this l.. read more
Dr. Wood ?

10 Months Ago

unusual and quite stunning, I must give this a try sometime it never hurts to experiment



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I love experimentation as there is nothing wrong with that. We are all trying to hone our craft and be excited as I'm by your poetry...:)............

Posted 10 Months Ago


i really like lurid three-quarte length profiles

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SHEEMA HUQ

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much Sir Paul
simple..clear..
Shows a pretender trying to cover up ones real personality
..?
I like this:-)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SHEEMA HUQ

4 Years Ago

ha ha,I think your'e right, or at least a nervous begginer's efforts, very nice of you to drop by a.. read more
beginner luck

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SHEEMA HUQ

4 Years Ago

as opposed to effort, plus inaite talent?
besides this was just one of those ones which appe.. read more
this is also known as a 'pattern poetry'. i'm surprised to find your subject versed so tersely and intricately. not only has the description of an 'amateur' been made enticingly but, the picture deriving from the words with varying syllables is also artistic. from my perspective, i see the exterior of a lady on your verse. it might be meant to reflect a female character with crude self-growth. i wonder if my eyes have deceived me.

Posted 4 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

SHEEMA HUQ

4 Years Ago

Hi Reeti
I'm really flattered that you should stop by and comment and I'm pleased that this l.. read more
Dr. Wood ?

10 Months Ago

unusual and quite stunning, I must give this a try sometime it never hurts to experiment
This was very interesting and I have written a couple of 'shape' poems purely by chance. Not sure I could do it by design as it takes imagination so well done

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SHEEMA HUQ

4 Years Ago

I think you are very good at shape poems actually
thanks for the encouragment John
plea.. read more

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Added on January 28, 2013
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SHEEMA HUQ
SHEEMA HUQ

LONDON , ENGLAND, United Kingdom



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