TAKE WITH WATER

TAKE WITH WATER

A Poem by SHEEMA HUQ
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A Poem

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Take with water:-

 

A disslovable song

A revolving thong

A slow releasing rhythm

A mystery which cannot be fathomed

An ego thinning capsule

A multi-pack of values

Drops for an invisible ear to make it reappear

A powdered substitute for eliminating fear o>


© 2017 SHEEMA HUQ



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A drug to combat addiction to a different drug..you've presented your concept clearly as well as portrayed yourself vividly..well done.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SHEEMA HUQ

4 Years Ago

Dear Tai, your visits mean a lot, much appreciated :)
I enjoyed your poem. Impressive. Very unique and different.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SHEEMA HUQ

4 Years Ago

Thank you so very much Tina!
A fine ode to dissolution. Powders...body...mind. Who needs beer anyway. Why heave upon an amber sea when stranger shores bekon.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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SHEEMA HUQ

4 Years Ago

Personally I wouldn't touch the stuff with a barge pole, I guess that a line about Beer is always go.. read more
Keep taking the pills!... (Holsten of course!) Cheers for the read... so different.

*bird*

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SHEEMA HUQ

4 Years Ago

Hi there Hotwater, your comments are much appreciated!
A powdered substitute for beer, now that is something to think about. Reminds me of an old Steven Wright joke, "I bought a box of powdered water, I didn't know what to add to it"

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SHEEMA HUQ

4 Years Ago

Thanks so much for your comment, Jack, I had not heard of Steven Wright or the joke that you just me.. read more
Swallow it all with water. Unique perspective. Lovely write

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SHEEMA HUQ

4 Years Ago

Nice to hear from you again Moon, thank you so much!
Powdered beer... why not?

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SHEEMA HUQ

4 Years Ago

Thanks for commenting Mark :)
utter nonsense but somehow makes perfect sense

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SHEEMA HUQ

4 Years Ago

Thank you for commenting :)
Water is life and a great medicine. Anything wrong or bad can be taken with water to dissolve it.
Clever!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SHEEMA HUQ

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much my dear :)
Hi Sheema, this is such an unusual piece with plays on words in a spunky little poem. It allows the reader to produce their own interpretation and certainly stimulates thought.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SHEEMA HUQ

4 Years Ago

Thanks for this review John :)

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Added on October 16, 2013
Last Updated on February 23, 2017
Tags: medication, water, poetry, poem

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SHEEMA HUQ
SHEEMA HUQ

LONDON , ENGLAND, United Kingdom



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