NEWCOMER

NEWCOMER

A Poem by SHEEMA HUQ
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Poem

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Newcomer of 12 hrs,
7 mins and 8 secs,
a calm dawn beckons,
as I gently cradle thee,
your precious body, so,
delicate and wee, while
my hand becomes
damp, as you have
casually done a pee.


© 2013 SHEEMA HUQ



Author's Note

SHEEMA HUQ
This is dedicated to my nice, aged 6.

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Ha ha. Brilliant. The poem like the child lulls you into the false sense of security and as you are busy adoring it does something gross on you. I love it. As a parent I can totally relate. Absolute classic. Im gonna be chuckling to myslef about this one all day.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SHEEMA HUQ

4 Years Ago

Really nice to hear from you, dear Author, thank you kindly.
L.Edward

4 Years Ago

My pleasure. An audience with you is something that I don't get to enjoy often enough for my liking... read more



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Haha! Twist of events brilliantly put..
Seems like you got lost in the moment adoring the little one.


Posted 3 Years Ago


ha,ha,ha thisn poem tickled my bones

Posted 4 Years Ago


This is love90ly, intimate and funny, brilliant poem

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SHEEMA HUQ

4 Years Ago

I'm so glad that you loved this one, Bobbie, nice to hear from you.
LOL!!... LOL... LOL!

*bird*

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SHEEMA HUQ

4 Years Ago

How very sweet of you.
This is cool. Babies are like angels. It's nice to cuddle them.

Posted 4 Years Ago


SHEEMA HUQ

4 Years Ago

Absolutely, thanks for reviewing.
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Pax
smiling over here.... I knew the feeling so well because I have taken care one of my many nephews and niece, experienced this kind of incident... very amusing my friend..

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SHEEMA HUQ

4 Years Ago

Thanks so much Pax :)
ohhhhhh the ride down memory lane...
them early hours of childbirth that everyone adores.!
nice one pal

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SHEEMA HUQ

4 Years Ago

Thanks so much Luviva
Ha ha. Brilliant. The poem like the child lulls you into the false sense of security and as you are busy adoring it does something gross on you. I love it. As a parent I can totally relate. Absolute classic. Im gonna be chuckling to myslef about this one all day.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SHEEMA HUQ

4 Years Ago

Really nice to hear from you, dear Author, thank you kindly.
L.Edward

4 Years Ago

My pleasure. An audience with you is something that I don't get to enjoy often enough for my liking... read more
How touching, how lovely you describe the joyous emotions parents feel when they hold their children in their cradle.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SHEEMA HUQ

4 Years Ago

Indeed there is a particular feeling for anyone who comes close to a new born baby, a very delicate .. read more
haha... probably smiling as she did ...?

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SHEEMA HUQ

4 Years Ago

Good wetness, thank you Mark :)

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SHEEMA HUQ
SHEEMA HUQ

LONDON , ENGLAND, United Kingdom



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