DREAMY EUPHORIA

DREAMY EUPHORIA

A Poem by SHEEMA HUQ
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A Poem

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      A sullen air of solemnity

       felt palpably forced,

                 undercurrents of

                  stress, earnestly

         soared, pin slanted

        hailstones purposefully

poured, as they thawed,

there followed a dreamy

euphoria, delectably caused,

by rose petals of browning

magenta, effusing an

abiding, sweet exuberance,

in  vivid, soothing,

gracious,  abundance. 


© 2013 SHEEMA HUQ



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I love you words and imagery in this. It reminds me of a wedding where one must marry, but everything eventually forced soft and smooth ... mixed with the weather, in this as a certain mood, which one can feel, I could be way off, but that's what I felt :) you write so beautifully my friend, thanks for sharing this pearl, of calmness.

- Elisa

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SHEEMA HUQ

4 Years Ago

Oh such beautiful words, I can see a opening of a new poem by you, dear poetess, muchly thankyous :).. read more

4 Years Ago

You're so ever welcome love, thanks for penning such art... xx



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That was beautiful twice with delicious rhythm, I think I'm going to read it again!
*interlude*

I'm tasting the image with that strangely silent post-hail orangey-purple light; I need to thank you, I hadn't remembered that otherwise. You've made a window, here.
Thank You!

^___________^!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Love the color usage in this. The colors and the rhythm are great.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SHEEMA HUQ

4 Years Ago

Hello, thanks so much!
The way in which you've placed your words and made them meld is like the gentle tapping on a drum, a musical mantra, words to dream with, time to close eyes and see 'sweet exuberance' in a place only 'you' can reach. Lovely.. i leave, smiling.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SHEEMA HUQ

4 Years Ago

I am very flattered by you comments, thank you dear Emma Joy, sincerely.
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Very smooth, soft, silk-like and beautiful are your words this day. As if a dream has appeared in broad daylight before my eyes. Gracefully the days pass and beauty becomes all the more evident. Lovely my friend.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SHEEMA HUQ

4 Years Ago

Hi Jack, you are very kind, thank you very much!
You write poems as that flown off the tongue and this is no exception, it is beautiful. I think it is so descriptive,no can almost smell the blossom

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SHEEMA HUQ

4 Years Ago

Gosh that's s compliment, I thank you so much, Bobbie!
a poem about growing into a kind of ethereal ecstasy and inner peace.. calming and well done.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SHEEMA HUQ

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much Tai.
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Pax
A sullen air of solemnity

~ what a relaxing words you have here... the peaceful abundance of your mind pinned here is really beautiful my friend.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SHEEMA HUQ

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much Pax.
I love you words and imagery in this. It reminds me of a wedding where one must marry, but everything eventually forced soft and smooth ... mixed with the weather, in this as a certain mood, which one can feel, I could be way off, but that's what I felt :) you write so beautifully my friend, thanks for sharing this pearl, of calmness.

- Elisa

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SHEEMA HUQ

4 Years Ago

Oh such beautiful words, I can see a opening of a new poem by you, dear poetess, muchly thankyous :).. read more

4 Years Ago

You're so ever welcome love, thanks for penning such art... xx
really enjoyed the hailstone analogy


Posted 4 Years Ago


SHEEMA HUQ

4 Years Ago

Thanks so much Dean.
So calming...just like the rose petals' essence.
We all wanted a perfect bliss...even in a dream.
Great!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SHEEMA HUQ

4 Years Ago

Thank you so kindly Dear Dhaye.
Dhaye

4 Years Ago

You're welcome.

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SHEEMA HUQ

LONDON , ENGLAND, United Kingdom



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