ROIZEDON...

A thought at sunset...

The sun-lit void spread out like a veil

Hides in its background a secret assail

Darkness shall pour out ; "The end!" all shall wail...

                        -Sindednis                        

Reviews

[ErikHansen67]

Well done. Screams to be read aloud!

[Mockingbird]

sounds apocalyptic. for some reason the length of the poem makes it sinister. also makes one's imagination run.

[Thea Fuentebella]

great poem. i perceived it as the end of the world because of the "the end" part :)
Thumbs up!

[Chris]

What is insight when
there is nothing in sight to
obstruct the unseen...

[.]

short and concise..you have conveyed that magical moment in all it's intensity exquisitely..and I love the reference to the veil. :)

[Arabdha]

Just three lines..and yet it speaks volumes..amazing ! :)

[Leslie Philibert]

Well written,good poem.

[Arielle Ann]

hope this never happens...but a wonderful haiku...

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

I like this modern haiku sinde. Well written. Good words and picturising the nature's gift.

[Tate Morgan]

I hope this doesnt happen to me But Iwant to go out under a falling star