The Romance of Snow

The Romance of Snow

A Poem by Shannon
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From Inject positivity's unpublished piece.

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The clear and cold winter nights hold great beauty
to those who have never held shoveling duty. 
Frosty windows inspire wonder and awe
until one has beheld the mess of a thaw. 
Dancing, floating snow flakes falling gently upon trees
always give way to cutting ice, making faces freeze.

The purest of whites, become a carpet that's soiled
marred by sand, salt and massive graters that toiled.  
Peering out the window, as one who has felt winter's sting,
I ponder an otherworldly landscape, silently drawing others in.
Seeing each unique flake suspended, amplifying moonlight,
I choose to revel in the romance of snow for a single night.

© 2017 Shannon



Author's Note

Shannon
This was a case of inspiration that begets inspiration. Upon hearing me laugh about the romance of snow, Dhiman wrote a poem. This is my response.

Thank you, Dhiman, for such a unique writing experience.

All constructive feedback is always welcome.

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Beautifully done! The snow, even if just for a moment, covers the scars, the imperfections and replaces it with such beauty and serenity. Even the cold and frost that accompany are like members of an orchestra, playing together as one to bring such majesty as a gift to the observer.

Posted 6 Days Ago


I used to look out my back window and see the new snowfall on the branches of trees which resembled a picture postcard. It was a beautiful sight.

Nice job on this. The images of snow and even dirt mixed in are vivid and clear.

Posted 1 Month Ago


There is something beautiful about snow. I live in northern Minnesota, so I see some pretty cold winters, but it's alright because there's something almost magical about the season. Though I do admit, but the end of winter, I'm about ready for things to heat up! Very good poem. Good pathos and pretty imagery.

Posted 2 Months Ago


I live in Northern Michigan and that first few days of snow is so magical. Then I'm done lol. I can do a month with a good attitude but then I'm over it. Maybe it's just because I'm getting older lol.. I loved this.. awesome write..xo

Posted 4 Months Ago


I think winter is beautiful. The way it shines in the moon like or under the street lights. The air just seems cleaner and crisp. Of course the pretty part goes out the window when you have to do clean up in the morning.

This was a great poem. I love poems about the seasons. Winter the most though.

Posted 5 Months Ago


I like the way you evaluate snow here. The very last two lines stand out especially. Also, there should be commas after soiled and salt in the second stanza. Nicely done.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Shannon

6 Months Ago

Thank you for both the read and helpful feedback.
nice rhyming ..two opposing views ..i love the snow when it is romantic .. but living so long in SD i do not enjoy winters ..the wind there blows 20-50 mph almost every day ..snow does not drift down ..it flies horizontally plastering the faces of signs not the tops ... but i sure enjoyed reading your poem ... the link did not work for me ..it took me to the "i'm not published yet" page ..but i will try again and search his handle as well
E.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Shannon

7 Months Ago

Hey, E. Thank you for pointing out the broken link. I see the other piece is unposted. Will definite.. read more
Well, it's good to be brought down to earth sometimes, as all romantics know.

A sobering reminder.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Shannon

8 Months Ago

I tend to be the antithesis of romantic, but occasionally the beauty confounds me as well.
Not a fan of winter at all! I suppose the only time I don't mind it is when its lightly snowed & everything is silent & snow white clean. Great write.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Shannon,
Dhiman and yourself must have fun collaborating! bless his heart to share his work this way. I can see your realistic and down to earth position in this snow creation.
"shoveling duty, mess of thaw,cutting ice, making faces freeze," to Dhiman's words.." Winter nights.. great beauty..flakes falling gently upon trees..unique flake suspended..amplifying moonlight.
This has been fun and interesting to read.
You are both pretty sharp cookies!
Blessings, Kathy

Posted 8 Months Ago


Shannon

8 Months Ago

I am glad you read both. I think they are morning meaningful together.

Thank you for.. read more
Kathy Van Kurin

8 Months Ago

You are welcome!

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