Everyone

Every day is a tale,

Every human is a book,

Every life is an epic.

As

Every moment breathes a poem

That swims into eternity.

Reviews

[Amila Jay]

Awesome write :))

[Allie]

Just lovely, and so true! I think I will keep this one around for a while when I need a little inspiration. It really makes my mind tick.

"every moment breathes a poem
that swims into eternity"
Wow. What a way to end it. Nicely done.

[Heather Clayton]

very nice...

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. I agree with your words. I believe every life had a reason. That is the reason I believe war is useless. Putting end to great cities, hope and the poor people in the way of the war machine. The one life lost in the mist of war and violence could of been the spark to save our world. I like the ending statement. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Geraldine]

Simple, short yet beautiful. ^^ Nice work. :D

[Thea]

Very well said in such simple yet meaningful words.
Thanks for this remarkable short piece.
Well done
:)))

[Deandra Dawn]

Very true, short and honest. Good job.

[Wendy Seames Garner]

This is so very true, though few people seem to realize it. Great job!

[Leslie Philibert]

A poem dripping with lyrical thought and talent. Good writing.