BLACK KITTEN

BLACK KITTEN

A Chapter by STAR CHILD

BLACK KITTEN




Black kitten purrs
A pretty little one
Even though they unfortunately
Over the years they have been given a bad connotation
But they are so cute
Tender and loving
They meow
Drinking milk from bowls










Allen Hollandsworth
"12/8/11




© 2012 STAR CHILD



Author's Note

STAR CHILD
did for bedtime stories KITTTENS

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I think your poems are getting better with following from what i've said , you might not of done it with my say but you're becoming more expressive i think . This poem is a nice one at best and it's fun and cute with some good descriptions and fact . I think if you keep your poems up like this with more lenght and lines and an extended vocab i think you'll be better than what you are already .

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Very sweet. I think this is a splendid kitten poem.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think your poems are getting better with following from what i've said , you might not of done it with my say but you're becoming more expressive i think . This poem is a nice one at best and it's fun and cute with some good descriptions and fact . I think if you keep your poems up like this with more lenght and lines and an extended vocab i think you'll be better than what you are already .

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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I love to write poetry i do many kinds of poetry but mostly i like taking people to magical places i mostly write about dragons and fairies i enjoy writting for children more..

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