THE GIRL

THE GIRL

A Story by DANGER

MANY WINDS WASH YOUR APPEARANCE, 
LIKE MASKING GLITTER, TO BE SHOWN 
AGAIN & AGAIN FOR SHARED CELEBRATIONS, 

ALL THE PAST, DEFINES THE SOIL, 
UNDERGROUND AND HIGHER, 
NO DESTRUCTION OR SCREAM OF THE WILD 

IT TOILS WITH AGE, 
ENABLE ME TO SQUEEZE OUT YOUR LIFE, 
SO BLEED
HAND IT OVER

THEN YOUR BODY WILL BE MINE, 
YOUR BLOOD IN MINE, 'WHY WONT YOU DIE?' 
YOU STRAYED SO FAR AWAY, 
YOU KEPT YOUR PUZZLEMENT SHUT OUT WHILE THEY KEPT BARKING, 

ONCE THERE WASN'T ANY WAY TO LET IT GO, 
ANY WAY TO LET IT OUT
THERE BESTOWED ON YOU, NOT ONE WAY TO REPLACE IT

ALL THE WORDS YOU KNOW, 
IN YOUR HANDS, YOU OWN, AND, YET, 
NONE OF THEM HAS EVER DESCRIBED:

THE CITY AFAR, IN RUINS, 
ITS OWN MONA LISA, 
A CASTLE STILL STANDING FROM PERMANENT DEFEAT, 
A WAY OF LIVING STRUCK 
DOWN FOR LIVING, TOO QUICK IS THEM, 
THEM THAT SHATTER FROM INTERNAL PRESSURE, 
SHOWING 
JUST AS QUICK


© 2017 DANGER



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This is really good its entertaining to read. I will tell you it could be great.
Some of your lines are relate-able some leave me blank.
ALL THE PAST, DEFINES THE SOIL,
UNDERGROUND AND HIGHER,
NO DESTRUCTION OR SCREAM OF THE WILD
These are good because they are dramatic and artistically done but they are also relate-able.
When I read the first line I imagine who planted the garden before mine and blood on the soil.
Which is probably not all normal however poetry is
subjective when lines made relate-able everyone may interpret differently.
The first three lines of the Poem are entertaining
I love to read but they do not get my imagery
going but when I read the the next three that I
gave example of they hit me with pleasant and harsh images at the same time and I Iike that soft and harsh reality thing that is how I attempt Poetry.
Good Job ROCK ON !!!!

Sheer Terror

Posted 5 Months Ago


DANGER

5 Months Ago

SO PUZZLEMENT KEPT TO THEM .. STUCK TO THEM.

OKAY OKAY! JUST ONE MORE!!

.. read more
DANGER

5 Months Ago

THIS IS THE LAST! I PROMISE

THIS HOME OF A REAL KIND OF ECONOMY/GOV'T... THEY WOULD B.. read more
TerryDarcy-Ryan   akaSheerTerror

5 Months Ago

Is this about judgement and religion
YOU KEPT YOUR PUZZLEMENT SHUT OUT WHILE THEY KEPT BARKIN.. read more

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