When I was your favorite book

When I was your favorite book

A Poem by SadBones
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I made a thing

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My cover caught your eye
You swept me off the shelf so fast
Without reading the warning sign

When I was your favorite book
You turned the page so eagerly
Unfolding all the mysteries 
Every page was Exciting
Every page was for new discoveries
You were High off what I could be

You read the cuts on my arms
Full of intrigue  
What could they mean?
A Damsel in distress, oh yippee.
You were stuck in a fantasy 

Then as you went on
You unraveled me entirely
I was not a mystery
I was a simple tragedy

So you put me back
I was no longer of interest
The good times are always the shortest
The bad times always seem to be so long

When you past the perils 
You reach the best
You were too impatient
Stopped at the mess
But you couldn't wait to part
So you gradually lost interest

You judge based on looks, Darling.
And the prettiest covers
Have the saddest stories
The maddest stories

I'm not finished being written
My story is too complex
I'm not a neat story, but a jumbled up mess.
You only open me if you want a test.

You were like a 1st grader
Reading Shakespeare
You just couldn't comprehend.


© 2016 SadBones


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WOW. Love it love it love it!! Such a wonderful write!! Absolutely beautiful, yet heartbreakingly honest. I also like the metaphors used through out. The last stanza is powerful. I love every line in every stanza though. This poem is truly powerful.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SadBones

7 Years Ago

Thanks so much! I didn't think that anyone would ever think that of any of my poetry.
Tamika

7 Years Ago

Don't doubt yourself- You are a fabulous writer!! Be proud of the talent you hold.
This is incredible. I really like this. keep writing!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Whaaat! This is amazinnggggggg. I love the new edit it's deeper and you can feel the pain

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like it
But add a little more to the end

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SadBones

7 Years Ago

Like what more papi
lovelyAnaa

7 Years Ago

Write about how it was her biggest fault

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Added on June 17, 2016
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Tags: favorite, love, exciting, thrilling, mystery, heartbreaks, swept, discovery, eargerly, life, loss, happiness, dissaointment

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