MEET ME

Meet me 
at that lovely place 
where stars are spread 
And sweet springs always lives.

 Meet me, at that place 
where little pieces of snow every time falls 
and a bunch of birds sings in a queer voice 
Where easy wind never come to end. 

Between this mead, under that big tree 
surrounded by this graceful environment 
we talk about love. 

I want to dance with you till the last breath 
I want to live with you till the end 
where desires are untied to move.

Reviews

[S]

When someone is in love, they always desire to be in company of their beloved. Often wanting separation from the rest of the world, where the two love birds can nestle into each other. This poem beautifully describes one such place. Very simple yet a very good piece.

[fadingtale]

Such a beautiful and inspiring piece of work! Thank you for submitting it for all about love contest!

[Lyndy]

This poem is very inspiring and I can imagine the feelings of the poet and the beautiful environment! :D

[Deepika]

Most of your poems are romantic and cute! Just as this one(y)

[Ana B.]

Very beautiful and romantic. A song for the heart :)

[ayesha gupta]

lovely imagination. good job!

[willweb]

This was absolutely beautiful. Had me singing as I read today.

[Sindu]

Paints a great picture. Even the time stops when it is shared with someone special. Really beautiful place ssadd :) just a few tweaks needed.

[Mikayla_Stagg]

Short but beautiful. Its an amazing thing to be in love

[anne]

this one is simple,beautiful and proflusive....liked it a lot..:))

[Matching Socks]

Beautifully expressed sentiments of love my dear.
You've captured those so well here. :-)
Like a piece of heaven.