I AM ALONE

I AM ALONE

A Poem by Saddam

i am alone

Behalf of happiness, mourn

Away by green wood, like that tree

who weeping at own pale departed leaf

Like that tree, I am one

I am alone.

 

I am alone

I am the end of own

Like that lamp, there is no lamp rope

without oil, it is come to end

As that, I am life's illusion

I am alone.


© 2014 Saddam


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A nice poem well written and it's beautiful! ^^

Posted 9 Years Ago


Amazing one, this one. Shows the cracks and a peek inside.
Liked this: behalf of happiness, mourn.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Nice writ so true we all feel alone. Some times


Posted 9 Years Ago


Great emotional piece, thanks for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I like the emotions that you've tried to pour in and the wonderful analogies (y)

Posted 9 Years Ago


such a beautiful piece..enjoyed this one...:))

Posted 9 Years Ago


I meditate to bring myself to that state. I am never alone, being everything to everybody. How I long for minutes of " life's illusion"......

Posted 9 Years Ago


an emotion building piece...

Posted 9 Years Ago


Great line: "I am life's illusion"

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very imaginative and filled with reality and emotions poured out there for all to experience..

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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RASRA, BALLIA, Uttar Pradesh, India



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