LOVE

Love make me cry 

Love make me fly 

Love feels me stranger 

 Love made me stronger. 

 My life was just pause 

 For living, love gave me cause 

 My heart was just beating 

 Love taught it to jingling. 

 Whenever, somewhere, I got dark 

 Next moment love spark 

 My life, actually, changing on a track 

 You, your love come for ending this rack. 

 Love with you, unless no life is there 

 Parted with you, no longer, I can bear.

Reviews

[costa siwale]

A well written piece my friend. I always feel refreshed by your work. Thumbs up

[Jamestown]

Well done, love is the answer to so many questions, thanks for sharing.

[Zanne]

Nice rhythm and flow to this piece. Simple and true, well written, I enjoyed it :)

[Avinash]

This is a fact there is no life without love. Without it you are just living without being alive.

[Prashant Pandey]

simplistic, rhythmic and awesome

[Lyndy]

This poem is lovely too. :D It's very beautiful! ^^

[BlackRose]

Amazing, beautiful rhyme. Such a strong heartfelt piece. Well done.

[MomzillaNC]

Love flows from us and into us. Deciding how or when to stem the flow will always be among the imponderables -- yet the poet will ever keep pondering…

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Every line rhythmed so amazingly
I totally loved this poem and every line is holding true meanig

Love feels me stranger
Love made me stronger.

My life was just pause
For living, love gave me cause

These few lines are my favorite ! : )

[Ana B.]

Sad but blissful. Well done my dear.....hope there's always room for love...