ONE LOVE

She was one of most beauty 

Met me at cross-way 

Her cheek was rosy 

Eyes were twinkled 

and her smile, gave me a sweet achievement. 

When I reached our destination 

I astonished fairy met just right. 

All times I kept eye's at her 

I can't do anything expect her 

I felled in my first love 

but my happiness was very short. 

Next day, she was out of reach 

She was a relation 

I was sad, all day 

She is my one-love 

I never forget her all my life.

Reviews

[Rehan Roy]

'Eyes were twinkled...She was a relation'-The inception of relationship starts with 'twinkled eyes' but sometimes ends with wet eyes. It may be true love or mere infatuation.But, yet for then moments,it seems 'She is my one love'.Those moments are too ineffable...if you are a true lover. Dear poet, you have written it beautifully.

[Saddam]

A big thank you for this lovely feedback for this. thank you very much.

[Ruth]

Ah, beautiful, melted my heart and yet left a lingering yearning xo

[Lyndy]

This poem is very nice and beautiful. Good job and well written! :D

[RAHUL RAJ]

very nice peom....its really heart touching

[Tina Louise UK]

Another beautifully touching piece :) x

[Saddam]

Thanks a lot dear...

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Awwwww, how sweet! Loved the poem.

Kaze~

[Saddam]

Thank you soooo much dear friend.

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your welcome my friend. :-)

[maria ( rose)]

She was one of most beauty
Met me at cross-way ..
beautifully written piece about romance & love.
♥maria

[Saddam]

I am much pleased that I can not express. Thank you.

[Brook]

Very beautiful, good job.

[Saddam]

Thank you dear.

[EmilyBianca]

beautifully written, You can never forget your first love.

[Saddam]

Thank you dear. It is true I can never forget but my wish is I forget her. Thanks

[xDalliance]

I adore the way you are able to pen down the feeling of love and pain so beautifully! I loved this one as usual! Well done Saddam! :)

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear.... I am silently happy.

[Priyanshi Dass]

Beautifully written. This is a very well worded piece of work. An excellent write.
Clearly displaying your pen's talent for a wealth of work ahead of you. Good luck.

[Saddam]

Thank you very much friend.

[Saddam]

Your avatar is very nice and symbol of freedom.