SHORT EPISODE

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SHORT EPISODE

The day was weekend

Like past days, I was at bench

And the sky was red

For sun, cloud was ion hurry to reach.

 

Birds were singing in lovely mode

With the air, I was moving here and there

Sudden, a delightful voice come across the road

I was amazed at her freshness and cheer.

 

She was so beautiful like rising sun

She was so naughty like playing fawn

She was so enchant, blither and wanton

She was so pretty like dawn.

 

The earth was stood when the bus stopped me

Some worried voice spread that I jitter

When the bus passed, I was in pain cruelly

With this short episode, I descend my folder.

 

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Reviews

[Blue]

Sometimes we encounter a stranger whom we'd like to know more but unfortunately, it doesn't just happen.

[Saddam]

You are almost on the way of my heart.. too thank full I'm.

[star73]

very creative and good imagination

[Saddam]

thanks friend....

[Vaishali Roopesh]

'She was so enchant, blither and wanton'
Beautiful poem :)

[Saddam]

thanks dear for your beautiful review...

[Vidya Bacchus]

"She was so beautiful like rising sun
She was so naughty like playing fawn
She was so enchant, blither and wanton
She was so pretty like dawn."
These lines were pure sweetness my dear :)

[Saddam]

thank you dear friend..

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Penny]

And this poem reminds me of Ruskin Bond's 'Night Train at Deoli'. Also, I can relate to it for my personal reasons. A lovely piece

[Saddam]

glad sir....thank you very much...

[Anand Sehgal]

very nice imagery. A dream sequence :)
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[Saddam]

thank you very much friend..

[Ahena MK]

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well written !!! wonderful work

[Saddam]

thank to you dear for reading.

[Sami Khalil]

"She was so beautiful like rising sun


She was so naughty like playing fawn


She was so enchant, blither and wanton


She was so pretty like dawn."

Those short encounters can make big difference. See how you described her...Bravo.........

[Saddam]

thank you dear..... I'm listining it with your poetry sir...

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. You are welcome...:)..........................