MEELAN

MEELAN

A Poem by Saddam
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Meelan is an Indian name. It is derived from a Sanskrit expression meaning "coming together".

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MEELAN

A walk in the evening, you and I

Sitting at the bench of beach

Seeing the sun, going down into the sea

As flowing water touching our feet.

 

Setting sun making shadow on the water

Sands reflect its flash and sparks

Tints pranks on her cheeks and shimmer

Soft breeze of west making her slacks.

 

Her hair dancing with air

She tries to put it under left ear

But spate of flow vagaries her heart

Then she turns toward me and whisper ­"

 

LOOK AT "MEELAN" OF EARTH AND SUN

BETWEEN THEM, THERE IS NONE, NO ONE.

© 2014 Saddam


Author's Note

Saddam
Meelan is also a name used in Romance- speaking Europe owing to its Ancient Roman meaning of "eager and laborious".

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Beautiful poetry, tenderly written.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is a beautifully written poem! I love it. ;)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear friend.....
This is fantastic my friend, so pretty and well written. Thanks for teaching
me a word as well and sharing this poem, b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear friend.
this is very tenderly written. The idea of there being no space between human love and an
earthy universe. A notion I will think long and hard about today.....well written....dana

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear friend...........
So sweet and romantic... a beautiful poem and definitely my new favorite by you!

:) Julie

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much my sweet and favorite friend.....
MsJewel

9 Years Ago

My pleasure!
Interesting piece of work thanks for sharing


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much for this kind review.
A. Amos

9 Years Ago

You're most welcome my friend...
That was very beautiful work and description, well done my friend :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear.
stars are far

9 Years Ago

always my pleasure :)
A beautiful one and of course heartwarming

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very sweet poem, nice rhyming and description. The subject is also good. Flawless and complete in itself.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Another beautiful poem.....

Posted 9 Years Ago



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