A SACRED BOND OF HEARTS

A SACRED BOND OF HEARTS

A Poem by Saddam
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A collaboration with very beautiful and intelligent and helpful writer Dale(Confuser)

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A Sacred Bond of Hearts

 

A sacred relationship between two

A holy bond of faith and truth

Revered and Strong together life long

A belief that never ends with strife

This is the devotion of our life

For infinity + infinity we will be

Loving constant hearts in sync

O dear, this vow we will keep

Forever together our belief

We make a home of joy and happiness

Like a warm fire, gently tended together

United, we are one not two

For eternity our commitment stirs

For that’s our unquestioning binding word,

Our life immortal with promises from above

Veiled devotion exposed every twilight & dawn

It’s our destiny and what we deserve

Together forever our love will remain strong

Happiness and joy will be lifelong.

15/05/2015

 ©2015 Dale and Saddam

© 2015 Saddam


Author's Note

Saddam
It was really fun dear Dale. Thanks for this Dale.
All Rate-Reviews welcomes.

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I commented this one at Dale's profile also.
Nice collaboratio.

I specifically like this part.
We make a home of joy and happiness
Like a warm fire, gently tended together
United, we are one not two

Just tells allot where these two are emotionally.

Thanks for sharing :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear...



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that was very beautiful work an i do admire this work of art that you created with your friend.
well done :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Confuser

8 Years Ago

I tried to help: You had the title, the theme, the beginning, a lot of content! You taught me a lot.. read more
stars are far

8 Years Ago

you both had a very beautiful combination of thoughts that created a great work :)
Confuser

8 Years Ago

Thank you dear stars are far. Dale
wow... what a exclusive poem...
this is the first time am reading happily ever after poem from your side...
i like it.. :)))

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear, same credit going to Dale, my fellow writer.
Jeyanthi

8 Years Ago

Credits to both...!!! :)
Confuser

8 Years Ago

Thank you so very much Jeyanthi!

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